First off - BRAVO. I LOVE a good AU. And this fucking delivered. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Aside from seeming a little disjointed at times, it had very good plot, complete with great character development and story arc. It was such a great story. You added quite a few self-deprecating A/Ns, but they truly weren't necessary!

You have a poeticism in your writing, especially in the last few chapters, that is truly beautiful. Dark's description of the snow in chapter 27... Oh my gosh... I died a little inside, as it reflects so much if my own view. I can't even tell you how many times I've had those same thoughts. D:

Technical critique: aside from grammatical and spelling errors, as well as missed/mixed up words (but hey - that's what the pros have editors for, amirite?), it was often difficult to tell who was speaking, or even thinking at times, as the paragraphs weren't properly separated. I was able to figure it out, but only after rereading certain sections. There was also a lot of experimental writing styles - which is totally cool, don't get me wrong - but it definitely distracted a bit. Obviously this was written years and years ago, so you'll probably never even read my critique, but I felt the need to point it out!

Anyway, I hope you are still out there writing somewhere... This plot was definitely original in my eyes and had me quite sucked in. Thank you for writing it, FINISHING it, and not taking it down. And I loved the happy ending. :)

I think "Cops and Rubbers" would've been a better name for this fanfiction

I knew it! I knew it Gandie had to be him...great story, happy ending, yay!

Lurker here...I just had to say that I would give anything to see that conversation between Link, his mom, and friends in that small apartment, played out. Classic. Love it.
*returns to lurking*

Oh my God! I love this story so much! It's amazing on so many levels. This was my second time reading it all the way through. The first time I was 12 I think maybe 13, but now at 16 I understand so much more!

Oh my God! I love your line breaks, they're so dramatic!
BumbumBUM!

He raped him!? That's horrible. Sheik the rapist. -_-

oh my gosh I LOVED this story!
SO GOOD!

i. love. this. shit! 3 so added to le fapping folder xDD

...so ...cute :') f'n cute and awesome

It's kinda cool to read about someone with split personalities actually as i have that problem and you're spot on about the blanking out thing. Absolutely awesome story by the way. Drew me in right off the bat. So cute how Link accepted him even with the two other personalities. Not many people like that in the world.

Thank you very much for writing this story, I really really enjoyed reading it ! (although I must say that I had guessed about the big plot twist from chapter 17... :p)

sequal ? :3

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this. Good job! XD

Aww such a happy ending! Loved it!