I can't believe I'm liking this fic! Gojyo and...Goku! WHOA!

Phew, I just realized this fic was written in 2005... lool

Baka I am. But in the end everybody's happy and so am I.

~ Hope everything's going on well on your side since back then when you posted this chapter.

The little POV are a bit repetitive in the form... Ok I know it's normal since they're all POVs, but maybe they'd look better in 3rd person...more dynamic? The narration is impeccable, though

And it's getting serious here... Wonder what comes next...?

1.“I got something for you to put in that great big mouth of yours.” ...aargh that's some quote...which leads us to

2. Someone please stop Goku, and

3. Hakkai needs to move his butt! lol

Don't forget to make everybody happy at the end, ok?

Slaash! lol And he used his tongue! lool That's wrong, man. And once again, Hakkai's the only one with reason... poor Hakkai. Don't let Gojyo play with him! I mean, not in the way that hurts... Ehm, not in the one that hurts the heart I mean. XD

lol

moonsilverfic rec'd this in one of her lj entries.

havent been disappointed yet in any of her recs so here i went

i've read some of your other fics too - and liked them

i dont know how i missed this one (i usually click on authors and read all the stuff an author writes about a particularly universe)

just wanted to say the title was perfect

and i really liked the story.

it was slow, and sweet. and sanzo was so himself.

thanks for writing that. i enjoyed it very much.

wow!good now time 4 sequal!Really u left urslef open 4 a sequal and i think tht all the readers want 1!

WOW!Completely loved this one. It's sort of rare to find one this good now a days. KEEP WRITING!

Aw, is this the end? Or is there more goodness? lol O, Sanzo's swet when he's shy! XD

O, o, o! Sweet pairings, my friend! This is so cool! _ Keep it coming!

Awesome. That was really touching and just... awesome. I really liked how you wrote Sanzo. not quite sure of himself or what he wants... And Goku, who was there to show him.

_melissa

You continue to impress me with these Saiyuki stories of yours.

I loved this one because it was perspectives and drabbly type writing with a coherent plot and center to it. It was hella fun to read.

Your write them all so well, especially Sanzo, whose not that easy to get right.

the story is really good! I liked the way you narrarated what happened then wrote the thoughts and feelings of each character in response to the events. I'v never seen that before, very unique!

Also, one thing, when switching POV, you can tell who the character is, but i caused some confusion a few times, so maybe just add at the top who's POV it is. Just a suggestion. Update soon! PLEASE! .

Wow, this story is so brilliant! I loved reading it, especially your idea of having four sections in each chapter which went through the thoughts of each character. It would have been funny to know how Hakuryu felt about the situation but I don’t think it would have been much apart from “cheep, cheep”.

It was nice how you developed their feelings too and how you had Sanzo breaking down like that…I don’t know why but that amuses me. And how Goku was crying at the end, that was so sad! And poor old Gojyo was confused…that wasn’t very nice.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

S. Chensu x.

P.S. I will be e-mailing you soon, so don't worry if you get a random e-mail in your inbox. If possible, I'd like your help with a petition. But I'll explain more in the e-mail.

Wonderful story!