Finally yamcha went out with a hole

Just despise what broly did to goku’s son but thank him for saving chi-chi goku

Enjoyable. However some spelling mistakes. Once again pretty good

I luv how u doin wit yo story so far

NICE I LOVE THIS KEEP WRITEING

Genial! Me encanto esta historia de principio a fin!
Ame la idea de la relación de Broly y Chichi...
Que creatividad! Espero que continues pronto!

Awesome story! I wish there were more chapters though...

I lik

Ok first off, you made total like ur Brolly , not his fan but I like him now
Vegeta going head to head with him and Goku uni-one body, the short imp would have been toast, ssj 2 is no match. against lssj.
Anyway I see ur back please update this fic too dying to read more

what when didi u updated it reawakening why didnt i noticed it before now i am suuuper excited to read it i thought that all the chapters in the end were the first ones written again hehehehe

Dear MajinBroli,

It’s me again. I have read your story “Breaking Free”, and let me tell you this story is SUPER AWESOME! THE MOST AMAZING story ever written! It is one of the BEST story that I EVER READ about DBZ.

Ok, where should I start, there are so many things running in my mind that I don’t know where to staring telling you.

Okay, first thing first, when Goku died, I was like ‘what?”, ‘how?’. I mean I understand that Goku was greatly outnumbered like one against 50 or something, but it Goku we’re talking about. Goku is known the most powerful man in the universe. In my mind, I was thinking how can he die from something like that? Either the soldiers are truly powerful or at that time Goku doesn’t reach to super sayjin yet. I was like ‘NO!” Goku can’t die. I was hoping for Goku to fight against Broly really bad. But then I want to read next to see what going to happen to Chi-Chi, Gohan, and Bulma.

Second thing is about Broly. Okay, from first reading about Broly, I was thinking Broly is the evil guy who just wanted to destroy every planet and everything. He’s the monster. When Chi-Chi, Gohan, and Bulma were to put with Broly, I was like ‘Oh No! how can they fight off Broly, the person that kill human with his pinky finger. He is going to rape them and kill them for good.” Interesting thing was that Broly and other aliens thought Chi-Chi is the sayjin female. But actually it was Gohan’s tail wrapped Chi-chi’s waist. That made them mistakenly thinking Chi-Chi is the last sayin female. I guess is a good thing because Chi-Chi and Bulma are still alive because of that. When Broly gave his blood to her, Chi-Chi now becomes sayjin for she had growed a tail. So that made Broly permanently think Chi-Chi is a sayjin. I wonder what happen if Broly realize that Chi-Chi is only a human female, probably he is going to kill her right then because he is looking specifically for female sayjin so that he can create pure sayjin blood son and pass on the title the legendary super sayjin to his son.

Gohan, poor little boy. I can’t image how brave our little Gohan have to put up with Broly. Gohan is just a little 5 year old kid and have to train under that macho Broly. It will be tough for Gohan will have some beatings from Broly. I felt quite torn when Broly brainwashed Gohan and made Gohan into killer like Broly. The part where Gohan doesn’t remember who Chi-Chi, Bulma, and Yamcha was and about to kill them, I was very unhappy. I couldn’t blame Gohan but to Broly. I was really angry and hate with what Broly did to Gohan. That is everything both Goku and Chi-Chi fight against for Gohan to become a killer. Goku died trying to protecting it.

I feel sorry for Piccolo, Yamcha, Krillin, and Tien. They were killed merciless by Broly. You know I have a hate and love thing for Broly. I hate Broly for what he done to Chi-Chi and Gohan and his evil psychotics side, but I couldn’t hate Broly on other part because he seemed to changed into a little nicer guy and his love for Chi-Chi. Base on what you describe, Broly does have nicer side of him. It just he was raised thru hatred and anger all the time that had shaped him into a blood thirsty and evil merciless killer. That is the reason I couldn’t hate him all the way like before. And I couldn’t hate him especially when he seemed to truly love Chi-Chi even his other psychotic side love Chi-Chi too. That made I don’t hate him like before. True that while Bulma, Chi-Chi, and Gohan live in the same room with Broly seemed pretty scary, but over all they are better than if they were to stuck with other slaves, then god know what more terrible and horror will happen to them with those alien soldiers. They will get rape, beaten, and humiliations for sure.

When Broly tried to offer Chi-Chi to be his mate, to me it seems pretty tempting because you have the most powerful man in the universe, not a super-sayjin but a legendary super sayjin, to be your husband, him only loves you, and he doesn’t mind that she already has a mate before, it is quite hard to resist, but Chi-Chi stood her ground and stay loyal to Goku and rejected Broly not one but more than twice. I must give applause to Chi-Chi. Chi-Chi has made the right choice because if she accepts Broly to be her husband, then what everything Goku did and fight for will stand for nothing. All Goku’s works are gone. And also Broly will probably discover that Chi-Chi doesn’t have a tail and will probably kill her? Chi-Chi would have betrayed her husband, Goku. I really like that Chi-Chi is very protective over Gohan. Chi-Chi doesn’t even afraid of Broly when come to Gohan. She even attacked Broly. When Broly killed Chi-Chi, I was really hate him you know. Thanks god, that Bulma saved Chi-Chi’s life back.

As I was reading the story, I have questions, who was the black figure in Chi-Chi’s and Bulma’s dream? I mean does Broly know that it exist in his room? The black figure almost rape Bulma and created love scenes with Broly in Chi-Chi’s head. I mean that black figure was the one who injured Chi-Chi and that caused Broly to give his blood to her to turn her into a sayjin. And I am glad that Broly finally killed that thing.

You know, you have twisted story plot. I didn’t know Goku’s spirit would join into Broly’s body. I have some agree and disagree over this. First, I don’t agree because doesn’t Goku watched and angry with what Broly had done to Gohan and Chi-Chi? I think you wrote that Goku did got angry with Broly. Can’t Goku asked Kami or Kao (and hopefully they agree) to have him return to save his wife and fight Broly rather than join with Broly? Second, I kind of agree because deep in my heart I kind of want Chi-Chi to pair with Broly, believe it or not, because seeing how Broly’s undying love and fall head over heel for her. So fusing Goku with Broly makes it perfect because that makes Chi-Chi is not totally betray Goku because Goku is inside of Broly and Broly the most powerful legendary super-sayjin found his love thru Chi-Chi. I always love any story that have a cold merciless killer fall in love with a strong headed girl and how she changes him into nicer would always interest me. I love this kind of story. And Broly and Chi-Chi are exactly like that.

Broly seemed to change after he find love to only Chi-Chi. It brings out the nicer side of Broly which he is like any normal man. I don’t hate Broly’s nicer side. I do sometime hate Broly’s evil psychotic side because this side he killed too much people. You know, with Goku joined into Broly’s body. I wonder does the evil psychotic side of Broly fight off Goku’s spirit? I mean Goku is nice and caring man of course that evil side of Broly will not accept him? Anyhow, I’m glad Goku finally got some control over Broly when his evil side make Broly into cold killer.

I like they way you describe Vegeta in this story. It is exactly like the Vegeta that I watched in the DBZ animated movie. I’m glad Vegeta and Bulma becomes a pair. I also like Yamcha in here. Poor him, he died helping Bulma and Chi-Chi escape. And I’m glad Vegeta finally get his revenge by killing Frieza. I’m gald Vegeta finally become a super-sayin.

As for Vegeta fight against Broly, I don’t know who to root for. The part of me want the guy that love Chi-Chi, the legendary super-sayjin Broly that fused with Goku’s spirit to win over Vegeta. But also a part of me want Vegeta to win over Broly for what Broly did damage to Chi-Chi and Gohan, and the entire universe.

I was reading the part when Broly freeze himself beside Chi-Chi and Gohan’s grave touched my heart. I was thinking ‘Wow, Broly did truly love Chi-Chi.” I want to kill the King Kold for killing Gohan and made Chi-Chi got raped by his so many soldiers. Broly seemed really pain about it. The part when Broly sensed Chi-Chi life is still alive, he immediately reawake and find her. Sometime I want Goku to become Broly, the Legendary super-sayjin, not join Broly but to become the actual character of Broly then that would be perfect. Goku and Chi-Chi.

When you say RECONTINUE this story. I was HAPPY, more the happy. I was super happy. This story is too GREAT to be discontinued. Because, again, your writing style, skills, and story plot are really AWESOME! I didn’t know that Bulma use the dragon balls to wish everything return back to normal. You know when I reading that part, I was like ‘Oh man! If this going to happen, then Goku shouldn’t have joined spirit with Broly so now Goku can return back with Chi-Chi and Gohan.” But oh well,

I do support that Broly fusing Goku’s spirit to be pair with Chi-Chi. I mean Chi-Chi doesn’t exactly betrayed Goku. Goku is still there. Goku want to join Broly to be with his family. At the end when Broly finally found Chi-Chi, she finally accepted Broly to be her husband. With Goku inside Broly, she sensed some habits of Goku thru Broly. So yeah, I do support Broly and Chi-Chi. Just make Broly evil psychotic side less evil.

I didn’t know you had the androids 16,17,18, and Dr. Gero showed up to fight against Broly. And future Trunk help Vegeta get back to the planet. I want to Broly to win over the androids, but they probably tricked him and observed his energy to make them stronger to fight off the weary and drained Broly. At the end Trunk and Vegeta get back in time to meet the androids. I’m glad that Vegeta had agreed to Trunk that he will not kill Broly. Please would you continue to update this story? I really want Vegeta and Trunk to finish that .

Again, sorry for this lengthy review. My email is

I enjoyed your stories you are my favourite author please don't leave me hanging the suspense is unbearable

Greatest storie I ever read u have got to finish I really want to finish reading that story. Thums up

Really good,pretty awesome

i love both of the breaking free stories i do hope you will finish this on day your such a great writer