this epilogue killed me. thanks for the story

Thank you for writing this story. It was so well-written and the end was beautiful. It honestly crushed me with hoe much turmoil you packed into the last chapter but I'm glad you portrayed them living a typical life, filled with problems that they saw through together. It was interesting to read from Logan's point of view as Veronica is the usual narrator. The story was a little angsty for me at points but I truly enjoyed it.

great story.

omg this ending was SAD, its a good thing im not reading this around other people, i have tears streaming down my face. excellent writing, your ability to convey feelings is astounding, from the smutty passion to this tragic epilogue :)

Really good story

Good story! however you made me cry at the end.

Beautiful story, as was the companion one. I'm crying.

Not sure that therapists say, or are even allowed to say the things that you have "Billy" saying to logan. This part does not really ring true in your story.

Very good.

Read your story today, I love the way you've helped these characters mature.

the epilogue was great.

So I'm new to the Mars universe and have absolutely fallen in love with LV. I've been going through the completed fics looking for good ones and am happy that I stumbled onto this one. Great story and fantastic writing! Honestly I have always liked to read stories more when wrote through a males POV so I was happy that this was done through Logan's eyes. And this epilogue about killed me. Even though it ended on a sad note knowing that they had a full life together made it ok. Thanks for writing this and I hope you have plenty of LV fics left to tell.

Well the ending made me want to cry but great story! I lloved it! Great job! Xoxo

What a beautiful story! You are such an amazing and talented writer! Thank you for sharing it with everyone.

Beautiful...thank you