Love this

Great story! The ending felt a bit rushed but other than that I loved the story :)

Awww!

Absolutely loved every word!

Hello there. Im leaving my Review now as I had to finish this fantastic story first. I loved it. I loved how you wrote Snape and how this relationship developed. Also I liked that you made them spend 3 month alone with each other and it was not a Marriage Law that forced them. I like to think about Snape as someone who cares if he sees someone in pain even if it is the little know it all. In the end I thought that Andrew might play a bigger role, because you gave some hints in that direction, but clearly you just wanted our couple to finally be happy together because them waited so long. The last months before the NEWTs they risked too much though when regarding her future, I think.

This was nothing short of an amazing story. You brought me to tears within the second chapter! Honestly I can’t get over this, I’ve read and reread twice! Just wow ️️️️️️

Awesome.

Hermione living with Snape is going to be an adventure even if she is so poorly.

I feel like this started off from a really good idea, the initial plot was very intriguing and unique. However, for me anyway, it got derailed just a few chapters in. Their romance doesn't really have much basis and kinda comes out of left field, it goes from her having a slight crush to her always thinking of him and then all of a sudden they are in a dramatic love with each other but can't be together...oh wait yes they can cause they are in hiding...oh wait no take that back, she is a student again. I just felt like their needed to be more build up to justify a relationship between them, other than them bonding over his sympathy for her because his mom was sick and he ends up curing her. I think that would have just renforced their mentor/student bond more than anything, yes it definitely would have made them closer and deepened her respect and gratitude for him, but made them fall in love? idk, maybe eventually but it just kinda happens.

Mostly I just think you were a victim of losing focus of where you started. You kept getting idea for where you wanted the story to go but before you really fleshed anything out, you got another idea, and then there were some inconsistencies as well. For example the trip to her parents where she is 17 but isn't allowed to do magic because it could lead the death eaters to them, yet Snape is allowed to, and then later we find out that Voldemort knew where they were anyway. The whole going into hiding was very abrupt, and in one sentence you said she was under a spell to stop her from moving because of re growing her liver, yet then they move her to going into hiding, and I Harry didn't make any logical sense to me as secret keeper. You also mention that they are going to be kept out of the final battle but then Harry shows up out of no where, seemingly in the middle of said battle, to transport them to it. Then there really isn't a final battle, Harry and Voldie just disappear for a week and no gets to find out what happened. And Hermione's entire 7th year seemed very disjointed. You started some kind of plot involving the head boy, what with him noticing Snape and Hermione being a little too close, even mention him freaking Hermione out a bit, but then he notices she isn't on the train and he quickly forgets about her? None of that seemed needed. Anyways, to make a long review come to an end, you have a lot of potential and definitely have a good mind for plots but need to work on focusing one at a time and sticking to it until a logical conclusion. Keep working on it and I think you could really put out something great!

This is gorgeous. Well done!

Lovely! I liked this one through and through. Thank you for sharing!

I just finished the first chapter and I can already tell that you will make me cry

Oh my god, this story is just lovely! Perfectly balanced, not too much fluff, jealousy or nonsense. I absolutely adored it :D

AWWWWWWW! Man I'm a sucker for happy endings and that was just beautiful! Good job and great read!

When she had a bath did that cure her of the fever? Also your never meant to put someone in a cold bath when they have fever! ITS SUPER DANGEROUS as Your body goes into shock ! They undressed her; put her in a tub of cool water. The woman from earlier, the same one who did her magic in front of Hermione so uncaringly, ran a washrag over her skinny, naked form, washing the fever away. They dried her, and put her clothes back on, the uniform not nearly so crisp now, and set her in a wheel chair. She couldn't keep her head up. She let it droop down and closed her eyes, the fever shunning her into unconsciousness once more.