Hey, it's me again. Could you take a look at my stories The Adventures Of Koops and U Goom: A New Year I bet if you read you'll see one of them might come in your community...

WOW. JUST AMAZING. THIS STORY WILL BE ADDED TO MY FAVORITES. WOW. THAT'S ALL I HAVE TO SAY. WOW.

"Bowser threw a left at Mario."

I think a word is missing here. Left what? (sweatdrop)

Anyways, very grabbing opening. Immediately the protagonist has been tossed out the window and somebody else is attacking. But... why is the whole chapter bold? It really hurts my eyes and feels kinda like an attention gimmick. If people have clicked the fic and it's good they're already gonna be reading it. X_x

It would be very cool if you made a sequal to this story.

Yes, this was a great story, very long, the longest i have ever read. Great job.

Uh, ninji are not X-Nauts.

for the love of GOD unbold the chapters. I literally cannot read it like that, it's making my eyes water.

kewl

Interesting!

No, i don't mean Jojora. The names are similar, but it's a coincidence. I don't plan on including Jojora at all actually, though the character is being considered for the sequel(if I can figure out what gender Jojora is- I think male, some think female, so it's hard to tell).

I'm also working on a chapter 0, a chapter exclusive to this site called Welcome to Hell.

Very good and suspenseful/serious like, but don't you mean Jojora from M&L:SS or someone else? Keep up the good work!

~Chicken Miasma

To answer your question, in a way; Peasley and Popple do team up with the heroes at one point in the story. Shortly afterward, however, the two sides do battle, though all 6 live on afterward.

Good job with the story... Are you gonna put blood or something like that? I loved that you put Vivian and Peasley on that story! Will Peasley help her to survive? I wish that... Yknow... I think she and Peasley make a good couple! 3

Deathnify...sounds like a being that is immune to all attacks...just the way i like a final boss to be! But i have this weird feeling that he is just a puppet... if it is that SUCKS! (

Ignore the message at the top of Chapter 6; it is just a reference to another story I am currently writing.

Did I mention that I hate the ridiculous rules this site has? If not for them, I could post that story here(it's in script-format). Unfortunatly, I'm going to have to rewrite the ENTIRE SERIES just to show it off here.