Please continue

you haven't updated in a while. i really like this story. please update soon!

Hey, I just went through m alert list and saw that you haven't updated in ages. Are you going to finish this story? I hope you do!

I freakin love it!

awesome, i'm lovin' it

but doen't she still need to break up with alex?

it's from "Liar, Liar"

i love that movie

I really am enjoying this story so much. With that said, the only thing I'm confussed about is that you said they were wearins sweats when he greeted her st the door. How did he get a belt and a pair of jeans on? I just realized it. Although it is kinda sexy for her to undo his belt and zipper. I figured I'd point that out to you. I do love this story, I think this is the second time I read it.

Wendy

I just reviewed Chapter 6. But, geez, I forgot, the quote in 6 is from Chinatown. And your're right about it not really making much sense, the first time round at least. And kudos to you, because of you I watched this movie, currently up there with Harvey in my favourite movies. Again, great fic

Very good, nice characterisation mostly , of Lorelai particularly. Rory and Luke both believable too. Nicole though I've never been able to particulaly grasp her character fully in the series did not seem horribly out. You have managed to make me enjoy a story about a part of the story that I don't really like being tampered with by fanfiction. Well done

You are becoming one of my favorite writers on this site. I really loved this story. The passion mixed with the confussion of emotions, was the perfect blend. I love how there wasn't much thought on how they would first kiss, it seemed spontanious, and feverious. That's how I wished they would have gotten together. The self-help Luke wit hthe tapes and the plan was a little boring. I liked your way so much better. More could happen that wat and it did. I liked how they found it difficult to look at each other because of the mixed emotions. The friendship they shared seemed very important, but their lust came through. I loved when Jess interupted, classic. Very humorous. Jess would have reacted that way or he might have reacted with some kind of cheer and 'it's about damn time.' Jess knows how Luke has felt; he's even comented on it a few times. And remember after L/N (I hate the way that looks) first date, he offered to leave fo a few hours, and he and Luke got into it. I think he might have been more receptive to the idea, just not seeing it with his own eyes up close. I also think he would have checked out Lor, what hot red blooded male wouldn't have, even to see what Rory might look like in a few more years.

My only gripe is were's the last chapter. You promised it back in August, 2005. I love closure, I need closure. The only thing you have going for you is there aren't too many loose ends to tie up. If you would've ended here without the promise of an update I would have been happy.

Great Story, I can't wait to read more. Do you post anywhere else? E mail me and let me know, I would love to read anything you have, I addicted to it now. Keep writing, cause it really rocks!

Wendy

Awesome story...I enjoyed reading it! I wish you could have finshed it though. But still great job!

cute quote...i dunno where its from though

update its been like months!

heh

Wow i just want to say that there is some great writing missy! haha, and if you didnt get that that was from Gilmore Girls, but of course you do! Who couldnt? Well my sister maybe... but that could be because shes nine... I dunno...

I just finished reading all six chapters! it was great! Loved the way you have the characters! It seems so real, like I could see it happening in the show! wow! lol And you better keep a writin cuz Im not a patient Girl, (And something Lorelai would say) Slutty Girl maybe... haha doesnt that sound like something she would say? I think so... haha Love it!

So seriously, I loved all of the chapters! each one was so realistic and well written! I think you should get an award! WOOT WOOT! and the Award for best Gilmore Girls Story goes to! BUM BUM BUM *Opens envelope* Rusty Bedsprings for her realistic story about two people, Luke Danes, and Lorelai Gilmore, Coming together and becoming more than just friends, after years of not noticing on another! (Everyone crying and applauding while you accept the award) And the croud goes wild! hahaha lol! I should so do this as a living lol!

Ha ok slow pokey get writing the next chapter cause it aint gonna write itself! Haha! ok great job two thumbs up! ha make it three, ill get a third thumb just for you!

HeartGilmoreGrls

Also known as the girl who has the nice man with the tire irons on speed dial...

Great Story and update soon!

Oh, you are a good wicked girl. I heart you so , oh why doesn't ASP use people like you for writers for the show?