The story is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter or the sequel or if there is none then the story was good as it is.

oh wow...another amazing fic. This Pokeshipper is happy to read your fics. Soo so dramatic.

Keep writing!

Very nice! I hope to see the last chapter someday, and if not, well, that's okay too.

I see Marina drowned. That really sucks. Poor gal. But it wasn't Misty's fault at all. Good work!

Good rescue scene! It was really cute. I enjoyed it very much!

I think when you wrote "wherehouse", you meant "warehouse". ;)

Aiyaa, very good. I liked this chapter, even if it was short. C'mon Misty! Fight! Fight fight fight!

First of all, I love how you make the characters older. I usually don't go for the romance fics when they're young, because they seem unrealistic to me.

Er...anyway, when Ash said he'd -never- let anything happen to her? I just about melted. In a sad, almost pathetic sort of way. I nearly cried.

I'm wondering what the accident was. Just a guess, but it wouldn't happen to be Misty driving, would it? Hmm...

Ahh, Ash... You know, you never know when the last time you'll see someone could be.

Ohh, very interesting. When you added how Ash wanted to say something before he left Misty, I knew something would happen. We, as humans, are so unthinking sometimes, don't you agree? I even tell my little baby (my cat) that I love her(and I give her a kiss) before I leave for work every morning. You never know when you may not be coming back, or if something will happen while you're gone that will leave you feeling guilty for the rest of your life.

Aww, man! It's time for me to get off this review box, cause I got the call from the people I'm housesitting for that I can go home now. Whew! I'll finish reading and reviewing this before I leave, of course. But they might not be awesome reviews.

Good job on this chapter. Bwahahaha!

Whoa. Now that's kinda creepy. A short chapter, but that's no problem. It's better that way in a sense. Especially because I can still remember the beginning of the chapter by the time I reach the end, so my review doesn't sound like I read the last paragraph and then clicked the review button.

If I were Misty, I wouldn't want to be there, either! Eek!

I just read Haunted chapter 5 and I loved it! You did an awsome job on it! I hope you do chapter 6 real soon! Keep up the great work!

thats so sweet. aww their first kiss. well i hope you you make the next chapter soon. i cant wait to read it. but this is a cute story. i cant wait to ready the next chapter. good luck on making it. _~buh byes

Finally you updated! For a second there I thought you like dissapeared. Anyways I like this chapter, I mean Ash and Misty confess there true feelings towards each other, like about time. ANyway update soon...er

Hey! You updated! _ And, My oh my, what and EXCITING update indeed! _

Your lead was terrific. I was instantly just as freaked out as Misty . . . but *phew* I was SO glad when I realized that she was with Ash!

Aw! This line was SO SWEET: -His arms were so strong around her, protecting her. She never wanted to let go, and she felt like if she did, she would fall to her knees and her world would fall apart right then and there.- *sniffles*

This was a nice little description: -Her tone was unconvincing as it hung tensely in the air.- I liked the use of ‘hung tensely’, very effective!

Gosh, this is really lovely. You are very talented. I’m so impressed by how easily the words flow and seem to effortlessly convey the most sincere emotions.

Oh, *flinch* I kinda felt sorry for Ash here: -“But…you’ve obviously been hiding something from me all these years. If you trusted me, then why…”-

He actually has a semi-good point!

*sniffles* That story about Marina *sniffles* SO SAD! ;_; Wa! Geeze, POOR MISTY! TO LIVE THROUGH SOMETHING THAT TERRIBLE! Gosh!

*awes* This was (yet another) perfect use of words: -her apology was more of a pleading request for forgiveness, but she meant it nonetheless.- *clutches heart* Of the drama! I love it! ~_

OMG, what does she mean about needing closure? *wonders* Ga, I can’t figure it out. . . it must have something to do with Marina, but what exactly, I’m not sure. . . hm. . .? Well, I guess I’m going to have to TRY and be patient until you update! _ Can my imagination enduring waiting. . .? Ga! I dunno! The suspense is actually quite painful. But I guess that just goes to prove how GREAT of a writer you are!

UPDATE! Pretty please? Hee hee!

Maia *hugs*

Yay! Update! LOL. Loved it though...liked the mood, don't ask me how or why..

Wow! What a nice chapter. They finally confessesed! :) And that time on the bridge didn't count ! Well, I hope you post the last chapter for this story, and the last few chapters for your other story soon!

WOW! it was so good (although completly over delayed) I'll forgive you for that because it was such a super chaperter YEAH! UPDATE SUPER SOON!

Oh, that was a spectacular chapter! I'm eagerly awaiting the last chapter! This story is excellent!