I read this before a year ago and it's still freaking hilarious. There's too many good parts to list. XD

I was seriously hyperventilating when Zel tried to eat his cake...x] *Crunch*...XD That was hilarious; love it.

Illisea- I laughed so hard I cried.

Verity- That was very... nauseating to read.

Anton- Ditto.

In a cooking class, this story could be used as an example of how not to do it.

Great story either way. It made me laugh. I like things that make me laugh. HA. HA. HA. (Don't ask...)

I had a very good time reading this.

Amusing and cute. -

That was so great!

-Ahria

LoL that was a good story! I like the part when Amelia asked how Zel liked the cake and he just said "Crunchy" *o*

There were a couple problems with grammar but it was hilarious! Get it beta read and resubmit and I'll review again! I loved the line "Gourry, move over." (make sure to add the comma) but IT was so funny I love the descriptions of the cakes too! Good job and keep writing I'm going to find more!

This story was hilarious and completely believable. My favorite part was when Zel ordered Gourry to move over so he could join in on the spying mission. This really highlights the sister/friendship between Lina and Amelia, as well as their competitive streaks. This reminds me of a story idea I have brewing in the back of my mind involving our favorite foursome, a bet and a huge housekeeping manual.

Ha ha! Ah, that was great. Excellent job with that-all in character, and nice flow. Very enjoyable :)

(Ooh...I'd try drawing a picture of that!)

hey what's up? your fnafic is funny i love it we i hope this isn't the end! well g2g ok bye

Loved it! _ Very cute.

[Finally a snap was heard and the knife went through.] Wouldn't that be horrible if the knife broke instead? ::sweatdrop::

[Only Amelia would turn a dessert into a form of justice.] You know...scarily enough...that's probably true. _ This comment had me laughing.

The whole boy going sick over the girl's food made me have a flashback to an anime called Fushigi Yuugi. [SPOILER ALERT] That main girl, Miaka makes alot of food to bake for Tamahome to win his heart against another girl, but instead ends up burning or at least ruining all the food. Tamahome calls it "disgusting"(to keep her safe by pushing her away), but as soon as she leaves, he ends up gorging all the food despite some gagging, and gets sick later and needs stomach medicine.

I wouldn't think you would get sick over eating one slice of burnt cake would make you sick, but then again, I never had. It would only take me one bite, to stop eating it.

Anyways, very cute. (500 degrees tho? Jeez Ame) _

Ramon: HA HA HA HA HA, OH man I had a million laughts!

Sunny: this fic is awesome! Lina and Amelia sure mess up the cakes they've made, and the poor boys, I can imagine how they felt by eating all that stuff.

Maliska: can you make a picture based on this fic you made? that would be awesome.