Reviews for Making Time
Angelfish369 chapter 15 . 6/9/2015
I did not expect it to end like this! It was a really sweet story. Lots of random pieces of drama and different issues coming up, but ended well with one last chaotic adventure before they go their own ways. Tai's efforts paid off, and hopefully they will remember and cherish this friendship in the future and work harder to keep in touch.
Angelfish369 chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
Maybe it's because it's late, but when I got to the very end of this chapter, when all the craziness has toned down, Tai's reason that his friends should make time for him really got to me. I teared up, and now I can't wait to read what happens next!
Moo Straberry chapter 15 . 8/14/2006
Your stories are really amazing. They progress well from scene to scene and it feels like you are reading about real people leading real lives. I can't say I particularly agree with your coupling for the most part, as I am a die-hard Taiora fan, but you write the couples convincingly enough that I can still enjoy your stories. However, I strongly suggest that you get a beta reader. Your spelling errors are really distracting, and they take a lot away from your writing. There are places where it's clear that you hit the 'accept' button on the spellcheck without looking at the word-for example, "trumpet" where it was suppose to say "triumph". This is consistant throughout all of your stories, and you need to address it. And you know what they say-no time like the present! I'd be happy to volunteer my services-I don't have a lot of time, but when I can find some I'd love to help you out a bit. That is, if you want it.

Keep on writing. You show a lot of promise.
Rainbow09 chapter 15 . 12/16/2005
Definitively, I LOVE YOUR FICS! This one's simply GREAT! You made an excelent endind with Taichi's injure and everyone's role! Humor and Seriousness all in one - I can't find the word - maybe, PRODIGIOUS! Lol!

...HOPING HERE 4 OTHER GREAT FIC, HUH? Yeah! I wanna that Taichi's "new chapter"! Lol!

SEE YA AROUND! n_n
mysticalruby chapter 14 . 12/9/2005
hey! that was awesome ! that thing with tai having a hangover was funny! lol, so are jun and tai gonna become a couple ? cuz they seem to be a cute couple!
Rainbow09 chapter 14 . 12/9/2005
YAY! I never thought you would be so fast! n_n GREAT! Lol! Taijun is always my safe boat when Sorato is around! Their "crazy demeanors" are even alike... LOL!

I'll B around! UPDATE!
Rainbow09 chapter 13 . 12/7/2005
YEAH! I'm glad you updated! (_)

...I really enjoyed when everybody saw Tai nacked! Lol! I never thought a shower could make laugh like this!

...and Jun's reaction...? I guess I've to wait to be sure! Lol!

UPDATE SOON! YAY! n_n
Rainbow09 chapter 12 . 12/5/2005
What else can I say? I LOVED THIS ONE! LOL!

I love the way you expose Taichi's thoughts - it sounds just like the original one! You sure understand his personality; as well as Yamato!

So... JUST UPDATE! YAY!

By the way... I love the way you write! n_n
mysticalruby chapter 12 . 11/1/2005
THIS STORY WAS SOO FUNNY THAT I WAS CRACKING UP & MY FAMILY THOUGHT THERE WAS SOMETHING WRONG W/ ME !LOL, IT WAS SO FUNNY , WELL TWO CHAPTERS BUT THE REST WAS GOOD TOO! I THINK IT WAS THE FIGHT & SOMETHING ELSE (MAYVE FUN AT THE LAKE?) WELL ANYWAYS PLZ CONTINUE!EVEN THO ITS A JOE/MIMI
Mia Kamiya chapter 12 . 8/27/2005
Great story can't wait for next.
aphinitea chapter 11 . 8/22/2005
okay, love that last little scene, it was gorgeous. Family time, people!

And for that JyouraKyoumi person...honestly, SPELL THINGS CORRECTLY FOR HEAVEN'S SAKES! AND, if you were talking about cliches, then wow! Look at you! because I'm pretty sure other people hvae thought of those couplings before!

Sheesh...IDIOTS

Anyway, hope you keep writing, because the storys going well so far!
Miss Takin chapter 11 . 8/21/2005
Oh...I love this story. It's so...happy...and yet it's not at the same time. But that's a good thing! It's a good balance.

Ah, for some reason I love seeing the digidestined drunk. It's one of my favourite things in fanfiction. I have no idea why...it just amuses me.

Keep writing, this story's so great!

And on a final note: OMG he said 'dunno'...
Mia Kamiya chapter 11 . 8/20/2005
That was cute,and Izzy and Mimi are funny when there drunk!
digihope chapter 11 . 8/19/2005
Booya! *is a raving takari fan* lol. I like this, at first I thought they were a little OOC, but then I remebered that they were older. People do change when they gert older, so I started getting into it more. I really liked the last two chapters it kinda brought back some part of season one for me(as well as fulfilling my takari need). All in all, great story, keep it up.
Mia Kamiya chapter 10 . 8/19/2005
Damm.. were have I been!(Shrugs) anyway Great Chapter or for me great the Davis,Tk,Kari,and Tai thing soo thing in chapter 10 was can't wait for the next chapter!
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