O_O ... For some reason, I knew this wouldn't turn out to be a happy ending. BUT I SO WANTED IT TO BE! I wanted it to be like a cruel, horrifying joke played on the characters AND the readers! You know, kinda like that one Goosebumps episode? What was it called? Um... "Welcome to Camp Nightmare"? Yeah, I think that was it.

Oh my gosh. Your story was so frealing awesome and scary I was almost convinced you where tim burton. That was the greatest story I have ever read. Thank you for making it.

Irkens don't sleep though...

So it's Miss Bitters house and she's killing and eating the children to fuel her demonc powers?

Holy F*ck! D8 That f***ing freaked me OUT! D8D8

I am so freaked out right now...that is the scariest fanfiction I have ever read. Despite the fact that I've pissed my pants, I enjoyed it greatly. It was very well-written and all that jazz. Now excuse me as I find a pair clean undies. XP

ciao :)

I read this earlier but I decided to review now. Aren't I cool? Not at all!

That was really really good! Please note that this is coming from a horror-hater (hate the whole "Don't go into the closet!" "Hey, I think I'll go into the closet! See, now why did you tell me no-HOLY CHOCOLATE SUCK MONKEY! WHAT THE F-" *killed* ... "Told you so.") so this means that your writing was amazing. Plus, you freaked me out. I couldn't stop shaking (read it in one night and finally fell asleep around 2 AM) and I would scream like GIR whenever I heard the phone ring for the next few days. Anyway, great job! And I really loved the Ring Around the Rosy incorporation. I do believe Ms. Bitters mentioned something about that song/the Bubonic Plague in the episode Dark Harvest. So, I liked the reference to her before you actually found out it was all her doing all along. If that wasn't the true intention, well now you can say it was! :)

P.S. Must...get...Ms. Bitters...for LEAVING GIR ALL ALONE WITHOUT A MASTER!

HOLY SHIT! THAT WAS THE FREAKIEST, MAN! KUDOS, BUT WHY DID EVERYONE HAVE TO DIIE...(WAHH!) OH, BTW, PLOT HOLE ALERT! WHEN DIB FOUND ZIM'S BODY, THE ROOM WAS COVERED IN BLOOD, NO? WELL, ZIM'S BLOOD IS PURPLE IN THIS STORY, AM I NOT CORRECT? AND IT SAID NOTHING ABOUT PURPLE BLOOD... OTHERWISE, DIB WOULD HAVE KNOWN ZIM WAS DEAD RIGHT AWAY...CUZ, I MEAN,WHO ELSE HAS PURPLE BLOOD? I GUESS THAT KINDA MAKES THE STORY A LITTLE LESS CREEPY...BUT NOT , AND ...? SO TOTALLY THE TYPE TO SEMD KIDS TO THEIR DOM,DOM,DOM,DOM,DOM,DOM,...YEAH, YOU GET MY POINT! ANYWAY, AWESOME STORY! SCARIER THAN IT LOOKS!~THE ALL CAPS REVIEWER

HOLY SHIT, MAN YOU'RE GOOD AT THIS HORROR STUFF! I READ THIS AT NIGHT, TOO, SO... WHOA!

That was one of the best stories I have read in a while! I know you probably havent hade a new review for this one in a long time, but oh well. I couldn't just leave without commenting! That would be an injustice to the story! Keep at it!

lol that was great...i should'ev know ms bitters had a part in it

that was so worth the read!

i admit the first reason i clicked this i thought it was going to be zadar...i like the weirdest couples, i don't even know why or how i started liking it...oh my im rambling _ lol my point was even though it wasn't that had to be one of the best stories iv read in a while can you make another zim story?

plz and thank you

I loved this story so much, so I have favorited it!

Amazing! Terrifyingly gripping. I'm very sad to see that you wont be doing a sequel. You are an excellent writer, and I look forward to reading any other stories you have and might post. Thanks for this bit of horror!

dude that is so fucked up they should make a movie of it. just not with the invader characters you know. It would be a wickedly creepy and extremely trippy movie. King of like the end of the descent, fucking evil ending.

th was the best freakin' story i've evr read! th s pretty much all i 1/2 2 say about th . -