GODS. MY HEART.

IS IT BAD THAT I WANT A WHOLE OC FILLED FIC ABOUT THIS TIME AND PLACE'S CIVIL WAR.

*gasp* preggers?

This is probably very late, but please update. I love this story, I truly do. Best one I've ever read. Pretty please?

Susan! And Jack! awesome. and i liked the addition of tim and izzy to the Tardis team. loved this

very good! I loved it!

this is all fairly confusing but nice. You'll need to explain the changes made to the end of the 1st season that you made at some point (i hope) and I'm glad Jack's back. Plus I like the relationship got going on there. Has Rose told about Miriam's results with the baby scanner yet...I mean if they're picking up and know what a gallifreyan dna looks like then surely this is a lot more widespread than they realise? Romana was a surprise and I like the cousins. Basically I like all of it just not sure what to make of some of it lol.

One of my fav bits is when the timejumper asked about badwolf and Rose replied 'So?' and then his response...also the confrontation between Rose and her mum finding out she was married was very good too...oh and the Doctor trying to divert attention by offering sweets...mentioning about his grandchildren...and loads of little other scenes!

Great chapter. I love that Jack is back. I can't wait to read the next installment in the Domestic series. )

Great chapter. I love what you've done with this story.

Great chapter. I love that you've done more than one story in the "Domestic" world.

Great chapter. I can't wait for what will happen next. )

Great chapter. I liked the way she found out about her pregnancy and the cousins' trip with them so far.

Great chapter. Somehow I don't think that bringing the cousins along will turn out to be a good idea..

Great chapter. I love how jealous the Doctor gets and the way he's always messing with Mickey. I'm glad Mickey has a girl and isn't just pining after Rose or anything.

Great prologue.