This story has haunted me when I first Started to read fanfiction I read thisBut at the time didn’t know how to favorite a story I’ve been searching for this story for a year and a half and finally found it again I desperately hope that someday it will be finished because I love the story

Amazing fanfic, your mum would be proud!

I know I'm a little late on the wishes, but I hope you're doing okay now. I know what it's like to lose someone you're close to. I hope you have gotten on with your life. Know that there are people who care, even if you don't know them. That there are people who are out there going through the same things as you. Know that it's going to be okay in the end and that its okay to mourn, it's okay to cry form them. Know that there are people who care for you, that you will get through that and that when you go, people will miss your laughter, your smiles, and you stories. Know that we will miss you.

This would be a lot better without Sinisra. She’s too much like an OC or a Mary Sue.

What the heck are you doing!? Why are you pairing Harry with one of his Professors much less Sinastra. And make up your mind if Harry is going to hate or like Dumbledore for Pete sake! The wishy washy feeling of it makes it horrible to read. Another thing what happened to the classes that they would most likely share? Did you get rid of CoMC just to make it harder on them? I'm sorry but I refuse to read the rest of this story when the exposition is lacking so much already.

sweet. would be nice to see this finished.

This story is so badly written, I want to cry.

I tried to read this chapter. This story had potential but you drag it out so arbitrarily and idiotically that I cannot proceed. Misc rapist-Ginny irrelevant subplot? Yeah-no.

This story drags, doesn’t it. The Ginny scene was pointless. Snape takes 5 chapters to arrive. Harry keeps passing out. What would it take to get the plot moving?

Eugh. Needless exposition on Veela history in the beginning of chapters.

I don't hold stopping writing this story against you xx
it was an amazing journey while it lasted and i can only send my condolences to your mother xx

Y el resto?

This is an amazing story. I'm so sorry about your mom. I can't imagine going on without mine. Since I assume you are not continuing this story just know that it is absolutely mind blowing and the way you have written this story is almost written in the style of actual authors and I can count on one hand the number of fanfiction authors I know who can write like that.

Earth

"Spring" from Vivaldi is my favourite part too :)