"Mate, we are as gay as two Irish leprechans prancing under a lucky rainbow."

okay that was funny.

~charlie

Lol. That's cute and real funny!

HA!

God, thats hilerious, I love it! Brilliant!

I very nice fic, I especially loved the line "Mate, we are as gay as two Irish leprechans prancing under a lucky rainbow.". This really made my day.

Very fun. You had me worried for a little bit there. keep it up! :)

Constructive critisism you say? More detail about what the characters are thinking says I. It gets really annoying reading pages of dialogue where you have to backtrack to know who is speaking where.

You plan to use dragon's blood on us if we don't review? Well, I for one am APPALLED. You'd kill an innocent dragon for such a trivial reason? Let it be known that Poly is making a stand! She is reviewing! EVERY REVIEW SAVES A DRAGON!

Now that that's out of my system... Adorable story. Remus really should chirp more often.

Love this story.

oh, you said constructive critisism? hm. What did you mean with "It's painful"? I see the reference to werewolves, but not to gays... O.O

Well, and the sudden ending was a bit irritating... but otherwise the fic is hilarious. (You don't want to write a sequel, do you?) ;)

Lapis

Yeah, that was awesome.

"As gay as two Irish leprechans prancing under a lucky rainbow."? That's pretty...HYSTERICAL! :D :D :D lol! Short and sweet, just the way I like it.

I guess it's...nice? But there was an awful lot of cussing and stuff. Hm...yeah, well, it was fine.

eheheheheheh... ah, that did my spirits good. Nicely done, thank you for making me smile.

it was cute! I was just a little confused about what he had confessed at first, but I guessed and i guessed right!

lol

great story

Is there anywhere more comfortable than the shoulder of someone you care about? I don't think so.

So sweet.

More?

Please.

Constructive criticism is having a day off, sorry!