That was beautifully written. This is also the first time I've ever said that since usually people just get a well written or good job. I applaud your word choices & the way the story flowed. I hadn't realized there would be a rape scene, but you handled it well. I'm looking forward to reading more by you. I enjoy Lily & James, but I like that you give them more problems to resolve together than just James being childish & growing up. The only thing that made me ponder was during the court room scene. Bagnold's lawyer claimed he knew too much about the government to take the serum, but Dumbledore didn't argue that he wouldn't have been asked about that. Bravo on this story!

Very sweet ending! I loved James in this story!
:)

Truthfully, I wanted to be a silent reader but your story moved me to the point where had I not repeated "Cannot be misty. Mother will freak." around 20 times before reading another paragraph, I would have bawled and cursed at that asshole who just ripped Lily to pieces.
So... When I read your final author's note, I was like "Whoop de doo! Gotta review!"
I honestly love your writing. Yes there are some mistakes but they don't detract from the wonderful your story is. I hope you are proud of yourself and of your writing skill because not a lot of writers make me feel this urge to say "Good Job! I'll be waiting for your next fic!"

Love,
Anonymous(fem)

I looked for the sequel but did not see one so I'm guessing there won't be one considering its been a few years. Right? I would love to see one anyways!1

Ok, Andrew is over written as a villan and has no depth, Lily would never stick to a guy like this, MUCH LESS break up with James for such a stupid reason, and IDK, this is very OOC and makes me unreasonably angry. Points for trying (very interesting plot), but no.

that was a completely ooc, completely ridiculous and... Completely brilliant, I love this story

great story!

Good story, but I was wondering... how old is Andrew?

Overall Good story. the rape was sad but it worked. Good job.

awesome! xx

That was amazing. I just felt peaceful at the end- confession- past few days when my lfe takes another turn I read this story and- wow. It just calms me down- I owe you bigtime.I'm amazed- I loved it. The writing was perfect and the plot- it was just amazing. And if you want to know- I pictured andrew as blonde with childish features and blue-grey eyes. That stroy was just peace, sincerity and perfection. A job well done.

I forgot how much I absolutely loved this story, Tasha. I miss you!

loveed itt!

it was such a cute endin.

though i did like how lil kinda injured andrew hm... yeah

luved it

OMG! that wuz a super duper amazingly wonderfully grate story! and the ending wuz perfect! i luvd it!