I love it! It's so beautiful, especially the last verse. Because I know that if I continue, I'll sound like a squealing fan-girl, I am going to stop on that. But it's so pretty, and so sad.

*breathes* Whoa...I mean, whoa, I mean, just...wow.

aww... i loved that! it was so sad... in a way that will stay at the back of you mind and jump out on you when you're just thinking. hauntingly sad, i suppose.

Beautifully bittersweet. I almost cried. I loved the message and I think that what you say is the truth.

Very good. Flows nicely, and the casual phrasing is nicely at odds with the subject.

Love the second verse.

This is a beautiful, moving poem that flows really well. The metre is perfect, and I like your word choices.

"The fearful grief in burning air

A night that will not know a dawn."

I love these lines in particular - lovely imagery!