Very good fic! )

Wow, that has to be the best sex scene that I have ever read. You wrote it tactfully, so thank you.

Overall this whole story was just an amazing read. :)

WOW! That was an amazing story - so sensual and ... whoa... time for a cold shower here too.

Great writing - I loved it!

Loved your smu-er story. Just the right combination.

Thanks.

I thought the whole dancing concept was a bit out of character and unrealistic. Not so much that Kara dances, that I can see, but that she would go off to dance in a room by herself. The rest of the 'plot' though (with Lee looking for Kara) was well done.

You write really good smut. Really good. Very evocative, vivid, arousing. I also enjoyed Lee's perspective - you suceeded in getting into his mind very realistically.

Absolutely wonderful! Your descriptions let my mind see the story.

I liked it. Will there be more?