Reviews for Between Heaven and Hell
gleamfang chapter 20 . 5/26/2011
Finally finished this epic tale!

I've read a few of your stories and I have been thoroughly engrossed by all of them! I just wish you would finish fate wild.

I really like the way you bring the Two lead characters together and was interested with Rinoa being a pyro expert. Original way to get them to fight back against those T-Rexaurs!

I really felt for Seifer's last valiant act to erase all the evidence and for Zell's strength of heart irregardless of his injuries. But what really got me going was Rinoa's sacrifice to drug Squall to give him freedom. My heart left my chest and almost stopped beating when Squall woke up alone and starting reading her letter. Thank you Soo much for adding Rinoa's POV at the back. Sooo happy for them now! Now I can sleep in peace. Kudos!

Cheers

Keep Writing
trevorami chapter 20 . 11/20/2009
This story very good. Such a good storyline, very unique. I enjoyed reading it so

much. I was really sad when seifer died, although he died valiantly. Also I wish zell could have escaped with squall and rinoa, bit I realize why he couldn't have P. Anyway, it was again a great pleasure to read one of your stories, they are very entertaining. I also appreciate the goofiness that you show after the chapters. Haha. You seem to have a sense of humor like me ]. Thank you for writing this, and I'm sure it won't be the last time I read one of your stories.
xXBadLuckDuckXx chapter 20 . 10/13/2009
great story
xXBadLuckDuckXx chapter 10 . 10/13/2009
why dont they use the powdersl... good story
aceacs123 chapter 20 . 5/2/2009
holy wow! that was a good read im gonna have to read all your others now. if they are half this good i think ill be happy! i was scared for a bit in the epiloge, when you said what she was wearing, but you turned it around and for that, im thankful
Freyjadour chapter 20 . 1/4/2009
Like i said distracted. Anyways, i finally finished your fic. What can i say but besides that it was great. Especially the ending. Really good. I liked this whole idea, not gonna lie the thought of people being eaten by T-rexs just caught my attention right away. But it was more then just some people being eaten. There was a complex plot involved in the background and it was great.

Gotta say i thought Seifer was hilarious half the time. And the wa he died, so badass. Happy ell survived even though you were planning on klling him. how could you...it's Zell! Anyways, ya another good job with another great fic.

Don't know what else to say so i guess thats it.

-Frey
Freyjadour chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Hey just telling ya i'm starting on this fic. And it sounds really promising. I wish i checked your profile earlier. I'm discovering all your great fics. Anyways you'll get another review when i'm done with it telling ya my thoughts.

-Frey
JayLiyah chapter 20 . 3/6/2006
Wow... I'm so in awe right now. I just finished reading this at almost 2 in the morning and I'm.. speechless!

I have to admit something.. when I first came across this story, and I read the small part about the Squall/Selphie pairing - it kind of turned me off so I moved on.

I came back to it again and I decided to give it another shot.. and I'm so happy I did. This was wonderful.

Fantastic job! I'm very surprised at how it turned out and I enjoyed it immensely. A lot of action, twists, conspiracies. Damn, I was even terrified of those T-rexaurs too and I'm just reading! XD It seemed realistic also, I could learn something from this. I loved how you developed the Squall and Rinoa moments throughout.. although I was a little disappointed at the end! I was expecting a big reunion! Grr.. but, thanks for writing this. You have a great imagination and a lot of talent. I hope you continue writing in the future. _
Star chapter 7 . 8/25/2005
hehe, I'm not cheating. I'm just checking something out! _ Anyway, Thanks for reading!
maraxus chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
i'm not going to critique her story, because not only was it great, she writes better than me...and i feel it should be her critiquing me...not only is she a good writer but a good person in general...and if you haven't read all of her stories i recommend you read as many as you can...i'll give you a dollar...if you do it'll make her feel better
End Transmission chapter 20 . 8/8/2005
yay! I loved t, every minute of it! Unfortunatly, I may not be able to update my story for a while still, to tired at night :P anyways though, great story, and im gonna go catch up with damaged hearts now!

-Tsuki
Blue chapter 20 . 8/7/2005
*standing ovation* Bravo. Great ending. I think this is slightly better than the alternate ) A little more..trouble, and it clears all charges. Maybe it's a lack of reading anything for 2 weeks (I've been playing Megaman Battle Network 3, it's almost claimed my soul), but I can find near nothing to complain about..or it could be that you're just THAT good. *briefly scans over chapter* Actually...I have nothing to complain about..wow...oh, and congratulations on finishing BHaH. *sends in Ton-o-Cookies*
crazycutie2 chapter 20 . 8/6/2005
Hey, I read through the whole story and I thought that it was really good!

Very unique and well written!
Lady-Rinoa chapter 20 . 8/6/2005
Of course EVERYTHING that you write makes me smile... Ü

i LOVE the ending ..

Rinoa and Squall are really made for each other.. ÜÜ

there are only 3 words to describe this fic ..

.. Simply The Best ..

Ü i'm also enjoying Damaged Hearts right now. Ü and i KNOW that your newest fic would also brighten up my day.. even my lonely nights.. Ü

thanks for the inspiration and encouragement... Ü

and from this, i assume that this would make us friends then?.. Ü

hehe .. good job!.. keep it up!.. take care always and godbless!.. Ü *mwahugz!*
Orestes666 chapter 20 . 8/4/2005
*Gasp* The ending was So good! Very dramatic and involving! I loved it. Sa well as the whole thing. m very bummed that it ended, but the ending was scrumtrulescent (Will Ferrel right there)! It was so awsome reading such an orginal story that was so well written. It was just as awsome talking to you too :)

I'll definately check out your new works as well as your previous ones too.

Oh! my trip was good :) The coast is always so much nicer! Well, except when you have hurricane warnings and what not... I hope thats not too bad :0

Anyway, thanx for the great read, and I'll talk to you laterz :)
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