Dear Ayla:

Did anybody ever think to tell Severus that the *important* kind of love isn't dependent on emotion?

Sincerely,
Bar Sira

Oh. Nice comparisons and great imagery. I loved the way you wrote Snape here. It was so sad to hear how Severus felt about Lucius. Ah, truly brilliant, once again. Thanks for posting.

Brilliant! Very sweet that part about Severus having cold feet but the urge to cover up Potter's feet.

Interesting. Nicely written- I especially liked the comparison between potions fumes and lovers fingers in his hair... and the idea that he and Lucius had some kind of... thing together. Disturbingly that is plausible. Keep writing!