Excellent Story please do more chapters

Hmm, this was both quite brilliant and unique. So it's sad that it's dead. Well, thanks for writing what you did of it, bye for now.

this story hasn't been updated in aprox 2 years the author hasn't up dated anything in aprox 1 year has Shadow Sword (cool name by the way) stopped writing?

I wish this would get updated, I'd love to see more!

this whole series is absolutely brilliant! some words are spelled incorrectly, and there are slight proofreading mistakes. the story is utterly wonderful. please make a sequel!

My first thought of this new "god" of chaos was Lord of Nightmares, from Slayers. An ever changing sea of chaos, her newly manifested eyes shown gold... yeah, it just jumped out to me.

Neat Story. I was just rereading it and spotted something I can't believe I missed the first time. Is Buffy's chaos patron L-Sama from slayers or just modeled after her and are Xander and Willow's patrons specific chararacters or modeled on anyone themselves? Anyways thanks for the good read.

One heck of a story you've got going here. The delay in this review was due to rereading the last few chapters to refresh my memory. Very intricate.

A good mix of 'shippiness and story. Much more like the series in that.

Thanks for adding more to this tale.

I would HATE to be facing Mrs. S when she is going into Demon Queen mode! I would rather deal with her polietly and calmly. Those who try to mess with the key just got a taste of what happens when you do! And Kakistos! Sounds like Faith's past has come back to haunt her!

Good chapter!

Wispr

Really love how your writing the story... you have a great eye foe details and you been able to keep the characters close to there TV show selfs even with all of the changes you've added to your world.

Great work!

Wispr

So, the ancient Vampire from Boston has arrived to try and cause trouble. And I HOPE that you plan on dealing with Glorificus! That (#E()#$*( BIMBOSLUT was a pain to watch as well as deal with!

Interesting new power you've given Buffy. I expect Xander to have many bloodhound and other canine jokes.

Kakistos and Trick seem to be about six months early. Great. Just what they needed.

I was kinda disappointed by the first scene. Buffy came in and went to where Willow was sitting and did...nothing. No a quick kiss, no friendly touch, not even a smile. Aren't they still girlfriends?

interesting, just the type of stories i love. Remind me of "i am what i am" by mmcgregor, in a way. Though this isn't going to be xander centric. great work!

I like the way that Joyce is thinking. Teach these kids, make sure that they know how to handle things. Because trouble is coming and they need to be prepared. As for Larry and his goon squad, I think that its The Judge that they are working for. And the Council had best rethink its policy. If they start messing with Joyce, they are going to be in for a WORLD of Pain!