Excellent! This is one of the best stories that I have ever read on Fanfiction.

I know it has been a long time since you last wrote anything for this story, but do you think you could write some more as I you like to know how Harry, Dudley and Hermione get on while they are abroad.

Please update really soon.

-(-)- Mark -(-)-

Shit if Moody tells Dumbledore there'll be one hell of a fight among the Granger's, Harry and Dumbledore.

Well in real life I sincerely doubt that Pettigrew would be retarded enough to actually go on public transportation even if everyone thinks he is dead it would be too large of a potential risk. However for the purposes of this fic I liked how Dudley pointed him out. :)

Hm this is a good story so far, keep up the good work and update soon

Warlock - has historical connotations of an evil wizard.

I remember a fantasy-role-playing game from 20 years ago called "Wizards & Warlocks". The Wizards were the good guys and advanced to Mage or something like that.

ONWARD!

Pretty good so far, keep it up.

good chapter, wonders what hermione will say when she finds out whats going on, byes

I like your story and the way Harry found Peter Pettigrew. Basically any story where Harry gets away from Dumbledore and spends time with Hermione is a good one to me. :)

love your story it is really good

good story so far, i have a question tho...the little authors note made me wonder, do u live in the northern california area...u mite not, but i live in that area adnthere is a radio station called 98 rock...so one never knows...

good, byes

hi great start, it sounds original can't wait to see more. keep it up

frozenwands

Its so hard to find fics with Dudley and Harry friends, but this is done really well. I hope Dudley joins harry and hermione on this trip

This is an interesting story. UPDATE SOON!