Reviews for Awakenings
Unnamed Wanderer chapter 52 . 8/31/2019
This is so cool! Been reading it for the past 3 days. This is great. Love your characterisations and imagery. Vivid and evocative. The unravelling mystery pulling one along throughout. The budding romance between Smith and Aleph was very sweet (and full of understandable misunderstandings.) Definitely the best Matrix fanfic I've come across. I dearly hope a sequel is still on the way.
Light Agent chapter 52 . 2/12/2019
14 years ago. 14 years ago, my Dear Lovelace, you have started writing the “Awakenings” at FF dot net. Lately, you have reloaded the story on AO3.

I’ve been a loyal fan of yours for all 14 years - and I patiently await the sequel.

“Awakenings” is one, if not the, best Agent Smith story out there. It is so beautifully written, the dynamics between Smith and Aleph are very believable and the idea of a circle within a circle, a prison in the Zion Archive HF 12-1, the reason why Smith is so, well… Smith and of course all the subtle romance and sexual tension between the two of them, it’s all taking our breath away. “Awakenings” is a very intelligently written piece.

Year after year I come back to “Awakenings”, year after year I reread the whole story, year after year I am still amazed.

Dear Lovelace, I truly hope that you will finish dusting off the “Awakenings” and cleaning it up a little - and then, finally write a sequel.

Because Smith and Aleph, there are not really free, aren’t they? They are still trapped by the Merovingian and The Powers That Be.

While the world outside the Matrix is ending, and perhaps the Matrix itself is soon to be dissolved.

And what of the romance between Smith and Aleph? Will he, a former Agent, fall for a former human? Can he? Will she?

Please don’t let us wait another 14 years, Dear Lovelace.

Please make a sequel. You are ready.

Love,
Light Agent
Amberlin chapter 51 . 2/19/2017
I've been re-reading this for awhile and I just have to say it's as amazing as it was the first time around.

Still holding out hope for a sequel, though ... no pressure :P
JaDe In NighT chapter 52 . 10/3/2015
Read it in one go and i have to say only that its Freacking Magnificent
chronotempus chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
This story was so beautifully written and poetic. I enjoyed it more than the sequels to the original. The original character had me from the getgo and the romance with Smith was incredibly believable and well, romantic. I especially loved Aleph's younger sister. Her whispering in her ear constantly, along with the conversation she had with Smith in the desert of the real. Loved it.

I was also happy to learn you added elements from the Animatrix, which is my favorite animated film of all time. I was grinning like an idiot, to be honest.

This is the first part? I wonder, are you still constructing the second and its taking a little long or should I not look forward to a part two?
expectopatronum267 chapter 52 . 7/5/2014
This is the best thing I have ever read. EVER! Thank you so much!
Guest chapter 52 . 2/28/2014
OMG! This story is UHMAZING! I love your writing style it's perfect:) I so do wish that you would write a sequel to it, I don't want this story to end anytime sooner! :)))) good job and keep up the good work:D
UNCORRUPTED630 chapter 52 . 12/4/2013
This is, in my opinion, the best fanfiction ever written. Please, PLEASE continue their story! You said there would be a sequel, and I must read more. I am begging you!
Commissar Admiral Kordoshky chapter 52 . 6/20/2013
One of *the* est Matrix stories ever.
Commissar Admiral Kordoshky chapter 7 . 6/18/2013
This chapter may not have smith. But it has pure class. Keep up the work, even though I haven't read the rest yet I feel like encouraging.

Der commissar
Shaded Red Rose chapter 52 . 4/7/2013
This is a fabulous story. It has been around three years, so were is the sequel? You did say the journey would continue. Besides this story is very well written with amazingly portrayed and written characters. Also this story has had a fabulous plot so far. I miss your writing. Please at least make an author's note explaining why you stopped writing.

Sincerely,
Shaded Red Rose
Cat of Flames chapter 52 . 10/6/2012
Amazing story. I can't wait for the sequel please make the next part of their story soon. They are perfect for each other.
Shayne Pratt chapter 52 . 10/4/2012
This was a heart wrenching soul lifting rollercoaster ride of a story! And only a first part you say? I must go and find the rest right away!
One percent chapter 52 . 7/30/2012
YOU PROMISED! The journey will continue!

I sure hope it does! Because, really... I did not have enough of their kisses. And why the hell would Aleph want a weapon after all that? XD

That was a fantastic tale. I enjoyed myself. I was so curious to discover the truth along with Aleph and Smith. It's really a master piece. Now, where's the REST?

Anyway, you deserve my thanks, a bug hug and cookies! And of course, the pleasure of knowing that you have completely absorbed the reader that I am into your dream world. Thank you again.
One percent chapter 50 . 7/30/2012
It is sad. But really, you captured their feelings perfectly.
No one is perfect I guess.

Hey, there is a point that made me laugh: Smith is still calling her Miss Green. hehe, is that a way to call someone you've already kissed twice, Smith? I love him.
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