Excellent!

I always wondered about that. This is a really unique piece of writing. It's almost guilty to feel relief about such a thing. Poor everyone involved...because Alice didn't really get to be a mum either. ;_;

Wow. I like this Alice. She's so ... human. I think I would've been secretly glad too, that it hadn't been my son. It so sad, though, to realize that all of her relief was so short-lived. Poor Alice and Frank. I love the way that Alice is almost jealous of Lily but feels close to her because of their common fear for their sons. I love the way that Alice tells Lily that Frank is useless. She's just so scared that she feels like nothing can protect her and her son. I love the image of Frank and Alice together on the Knight Bus. Oh my goodness! That must have been terrible, but all the other options are so much worse. Heh. This is lovely. It's so bittersweet. Thanks for sharing. Once again, I'm impressed by your command of the characters and their plights. I started off by reading your Tao of Job, I and absolutely loved it. I do hope you keep writing. Thanks so much for sharing.

Very nicely done. I like how she thinks "Better her than me." Kind of makes me think that maybe she shouldn't have thought that, like it was sort of bad karma. Alice has intrigued me since GoF, nice job bringing her to life.

That was excellent, its good to see Alice's take on the propecy and how Neville and Harry are connected.

Oh, that was so sad... Very intriguing though. I've never read anything from Alice's point of view before; I really don't think I've even read anything with her in it before. It was really interesting, at any rate, and really well written. Keep up the good work! :)

That story really wanted to make me cry. Alice Longbottom is rarely written about and I liked this idea of her mind. It was well written and really brought out the worry of being a mother. Fantastic job.

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