| Reviews for The seventh guest |
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AMANDA J chapter 7 . 1/11/2016 I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! LLLUUUUFFFFFYYY! ALL HAIL THE PIRATE KING! WOOO! |
WingsofaBelle chapter 10 . 6/25/2014 awww that was so adorable! So ace survived huh? that's awesome, i so wish he actually did survive. |
Redmage2 chapter 10 . 7/16/2008 This is such a wonderful story! I absolutely love it. |
Sonic Sound chapter 10 . 5/26/2008 an absolutely amazing story, especially the last lines |
Pookey chapter 10 . 8/6/2007 YAY! oh that was Awesome! omgosh that was so KOOL! im in like awe and i was cheering in my head as i was reading and luffy and sanji and ah i LOVED IT! favsfavsfavsfavsfavs! |
Akseel chapter 6 . 1/26/2007 Haha ! Nice cliffie ! And I had a good laugh when I read Mr. Mange-tout's name. Although, I guess it makes sense that a food critic would have a french name. Even if it sounds kinda weird to a French-speaker. So Ace has left, but I hope he comes back soon. And now, Marimo shows up ! (I do like Zoro, but that nickname is so much fun...) And Don Krieg, but since Krieg was beaten by a beginner-Luffy, he stands no chance with Sanji and everyone here. Pity Ace left, he'd have just fried Krieg's pirate fleet. Hehe, I like this story more and more... |
Akseel chapter 5 . 1/26/2007 Well, I dunno why you don't like this chapter, 'cause it's pretty good. And there's Ace ! *loves Ace* Hem. But I know what you mean - often, writers feel like they're writing bad, even when they aren't - I have the same problem. Anyway, I like your take on the future Straw Hat pirates a lot. I'm a bit surprised Patty doesn't want to accept pirates, though. If I remember correctly, Zeff accepted anyone who could pay in his restaurant, didn't he ? But well, maybe things are different if it's the Pirate Kind nakamas and brother, and not just any pirate. I bet Sanji and co will get back to forming a crew - there's just Luffy missing, and they can go pirating, pillaging and plundering again. And with Ace too ! Speaking of Ace, it's not very clear whether he's on his own, or still working for Whitebeard, but I guess we'll know in later chapters. At any rate, I like this story a lot. Great job. |
Thowra chapter 10 . 7/20/2006 This story really deserves a reveiw! I haven't reveiwed a story for a very long now, but yours are great, so I had to. It was great the way you explained the title of your fic at the very end as well ;) |
noone123456789 chapter 10 . 4/19/2006 I loved it... This was one of the greatest stories I've ever read! I can't wait to read more of your work! |
Darkday Chaos chapter 10 . 12/10/2005 MWEEHH! *huggles computer* SAKE FOR ALL! *throws bottles all around* LOVE IT! The reason I didn't review for capter 9 was because I was dead then, but now I live again! _ For the whole story, I was all, 'Oh gosh, is Sanji-san going to stay on Sagatie? That doesn't seem right! He would be so lonely! But how would he be able to go with Luffy-sama again? Sagatie is his dream!' and so forth, but you managed to roll the adventure up, slap on a happy, fufulling 'Owari' and sell that puppy! I thought it was impossible, I truly did. ROCK ON WIT YUH BAYD SELPHE! DDC apologizes and squees inanely. (poor Shankusuu~ T-T Luffy-sama is a good guy) |
Saiyako chapter 10 . 10/28/2005 This is a really great story. I didn't like the thought of the Straw-Hats having split up, but to see the way they come back together and everything just makes sense for them again makes it worth it. I really like the OCs in this - their personalities come through without me ever feeling like they're taking over the story. And I love the way you write the Straw-Hats, too - they've grown a lot in those nine years without changing too much to be believable. And that ending is great. |
poltergeistreport101 chapter 10 . 10/2/2005 awesome! you should make a sequal... |
Hybrid chapter 10 . 10/1/2005 OhEmGee. O.O Wow. This story was absolutely great, uber and awesome. I loved it. Especially the last paragraph. It totally made my day. It's so super fantastico! Five stars fo' you P ;Hybrid |
chibified kitsunes chapter 10 . 9/30/2005 i canNOT believe i didn't review this earlier... The first guest had reawakened the pirate in him. The second and third guest had made him long for adventure. The fourth and fifth guest had given him back the happiness he thought he had lost a long time ago. The sixth guest had filled him with fighting spirit, but it had been the seventh who had given him back his will to live. your last paragraph was just beautiful... which explains fully the title of the story. i loved it. |
Digitaldreamer chapter 10 . 9/24/2005 Wow. I've been too busy to read lately, but at long last I've gotten some free time and got to check out the last few chapters of this fic. *_* It was perfect! The fight between Krieg and Luffy was just amazing, especially the part where Luffy got hit by the seastone bullet and didn't let it stop him. It was wonderfully done. Then came the celebrations afterward. Perfectly done and heartwarming, it all feels like just this perfect blur to me. I loved the part where Sanji's appretices were asking if Luffy really was King of Pirates. X3 So perfect. Also, the part where Ace was making fire dragons...squee! And then everyone gets back together to sail again! Uwah, that makes me so happy! Shanks' death was so sad. ;_; Although we never saw it, I can picture it in my mind, and it's sad. Good thing Usopp doesn't know...man. My favorite part was the end though. Horray for the seventh guest! I loved this fic so much. Your writing continues to amaze me with its spot on characterization and perfect wording. It was just wonderful. I think Sanji's restaurant isn't the only thing that should be recieving five stars, ne? ~*Digitaldreamer*~ |