| Reviews for Warrior's Strength, Child's Innocence |
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my 2 guys chapter 22 . 7/6 that was great keep the chapters coming |
T6a5n6k8 chapter 2 . 12/23/2019 Naruto: goes into sand and just fuckin leaves with not only their jinchuriki, but the kazekage's youngest son. sand: tf naruto: haha nerds, *proceeds to steal another jinchuriki from the mist* mist: yo wtf naruto: hey look over here mist and sand: *looks* naruto: BITCH |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2019 Good so far |
lara5170 chapter 11 . 1/27/2019 Are you homophobic? |
lara5170 chapter 6 . 1/27/2019 Temari and her brother don't recognize Gaara? Kakashi doesn't recognize Naruto? None of this is making sense. |
lara5170 chapter 5 . 1/27/2019 The three of them have absolutely no experience. They miraculously were able to travel the elemental nations without ever being attacked or having a battle and magically found others who were willing to train them for free. None of this makes sense. |
lara5170 chapter 4 . 1/27/2019 This story is really not making sense. |
lara5170 chapter 3 . 1/27/2019 How much magic instant time is passing for them? Much of this is not making sense |
lara5170 chapter 2 . 1/27/2019 The Hokage finds out that a 5 year old jinchuriki may have wandered away or been kidnapped and he decides to do nothing? |
chancellor77 chapter 4 . 3/2/2018 sooo your just gonna make them all the same? |
chancellor77 chapter 5 . 3/2/2018 testing which summon affinity they have...well it is your fanfic i guess |
chancellor77 chapter 4 . 3/2/2018 sooo your just gonna make them all the same? |
E.Richtofen chapter 22 . 8/12/2017 Is there a sequel? The ending was very wide open. As for the plot it was great, it would be awesome to see Sasuke new change in behavior and Lee's progress after the timeskip. Not to mention several scenes of Naruto and co arriving at their destination during the timeskip. Please, tell me that there is a sequel. |
E.Richtofen chapter 19 . 8/12/2017 Hiroshi has become one of my instant favorites, since the chunnin exams, he is both hilarious and cunning. He was the perfect replacer for Naruto in Team 7, but yet he is not a clone of Naruto. Definitely a good OC, but not as developed (his backstory, goals, ambitions), weren't hit too much, but that might because he is more of a side-character. |
E.Richtofen chapter 14 . 8/12/2017 What really jumped out on me, is the possibility of Naruto looking into finding a way for Lee to use chakra, I hope it happens. Lee deserves it, and with his determination and even a basic level knowledge of jutsus I bet he could improve his overall taijutsu. |