Reviews for Mantle |
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AmaraRae chapter 2 . 4/6/2018 Gordon should already be Commisoner sorry I'm being nitpicky. I'm sorry. I just have issues with that. |
Team FT chapter 20 . 11/30/2017 Even if I am years late, I thought I'd leave my two cents. First off, this was written very well with the grammar and everything. I know that doesn't seem that important, but it is. Not many authors have very good grammar and it bugs the crap out of me. Now for my criticism. My biggest bone to pick was about how Grayson was as Batman. To me, he didn't portray Batman very well. Batman is not the type of person to take help from anyone, so him having a bunch of teens help him didn t fit Batman's character. Also, he isn't one to take orders well, or receive backtalk when he gives them, so him being so adjusting and willing with the Titans just felt wrong to me. Finally, I think Dick showed too much emotion as the Bat. Batman is the type of person that literally almost nothing can crack his stoic exterior. Well, that were just my thoughts. |
Amydiddle chapter 8 . 1/5/2013 Love how Harley is here |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 8 . 8/16/2011 Poor Starfire...And the ending made me giggle... |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 7 . 8/16/2011 Robin needs to learn to trust his friends better. |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 6 . 8/16/2011 Robin likes StarFire~XD |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 5 . 8/15/2011 That was funny...Poor Starfire.. |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 4 . 8/14/2011 Poor Batman,working Nice riddles. |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 3 . 8/14/2011 Go Robin/Dick!He is so mature... |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 2 . 8/13/2011 Poor Dick,hes seen some of his family and...DX The other Titans are stupid... |
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 8/13/2011 Awww...Poor Robin... |
yob3 chapter 10 . 4/30/2011 Robert Kane Memorial bridge? Really? |
DYlogger chapter 14 . 12/12/2009 Gotham has a bridge named after Bob Kane? Guess it only makes sense since he created Batman... |
Imaginationqueen87 chapter 3 . 11/26/2007 I thought Ace was a Great Dane... Oh well it's your story. Interesting concept, I can't wait to get through the next chapters and see what's going to happen |
Lord Hadrian Black chapter 20 . 11/25/2006 i loved the story... it was just amazing/ you seem to know alot about the Gotham knights and all that gotham stuff! man i enjoyed this book! your an amazing author.! -Justin |