:) great story and case

Awesome!

I really liked how you made Grissom the one to want to leave in this story, and how you made him the uncertain one.

This was an incredible case file. Lots of detail, but still plenty of romance and character interaction.

love! i don't know if you write or check this anymore, but it was so great )

This is a very well-written story with a good casefile. Am sad for the victim and her parents, but you made the story very realistic and believable. Loved how you've written the relationship between Sara and Grissom with their insecurities and their teasing.

You write a great complex case story! I feel a bit sad for Grissom - but this was very realistic. And we got the happy couple at the end, so that's good enough in my book.

So it's a confirmation : you really are a great author.

I have a lot of things to tell you but my english "is bad on SO many levels"... I'm going to do a little summary of my impressions:

Frankly at first, I wasn't a fan because -and it's very personal I agree- I had enough to see Griss and Sara always in conflict; it's very very used in the fics about them. (You know what I mean: Sara is very confused and angry and Griss very very confused and...confused. lol) I was affraid to read again a story about that particular subject (even if yes it always will be part of both of them): I was so wrong ! Your so good that even though you used a situation "déjà vu" one thousand times you manage to establish an interest from the reader. (a great interest, I can assure you).

Plus, all the characters from the original serie are there: Cath, Warrick, Nick, Brass and Greg : a very good point in my opinion. Beacause even though I'm quite the shipper, I love all the characters and I'm enjoying to see all of them in your story.

Anyway, in order to make a long story a short one : I hope you'll write a lot of new fics. Thank you very much for all your work!

I'm glad you were able to finish this one up! Loved it! Great ending and an excellent job tying off all the loose ends. Hope to see lots more writing from you soon!

It's beautiful! So sad to see this coming to an end. Hopefully, you'll still continue to write, right? Please...

Give 'em heaps Griss. I love the way he was going to make the lab wait. LOL!

Nice joke about the annual quota - great way to end it.

Wow, the ending of this chapter was powerful. Chills, I got chills.

This was an incredible piece of work - I enjoyed how you portrayed Sara and Grissom with all their flaws and yet kept them very much in character.

I enjoyed how the case was put together, I kept suspecting Dvorak was working alone because he was so squeaky clean. Very good plotline. I also enjoyed how this really wasn't a 'happy' ending, the victim has serious repercussions from her experience, the parents were now dealing with the aftermath of recovering their daughter, and the politics were dirty and unfair and sadly really believabe.

Thanks so much for finishing this story - I'm awestruck by your talent!

Best,

Taramis

Fabulous story!

Thank you very much for this story. Both the casefile and GSR had me hooked from the beginning. The ending has a nice bittersweet note and hope for the future. Thanks a lot!