This whole Pizzazz drama was really pathetic and corny. It wasn't that deep. It wasn't like Pizzazz and Riot are together. Pizzazz doesn't own Riot for fuck's sake. He can date anyone. He's 100 percent single. Pizzazz is an assuming bitch and it's her fault if she gets hurt. It's on her. She's the one who created those fake fantasies in her dumb head. She's assuming and that's what she gets from being assuming. You don't own the man, bitch. She needs to mature. She ain't a victim here. An assuming bitch doesn't have the right to get mad, really. She has a red flag. She's being possessive with the man that she doesn't even own. That's a red flag. Bitch, get over yourself. You don't own that man in the first place. That's the consequences of being an assuming bitch. He's not even courting you. You've created those stupid fantasies and that's your fault. It's on you. Period

Ugh. Well it was partly Pizzazz's fault for not taking the obvious hints he was dropping, but still I feel bad for her all the same.

This is going to hell all over the place.

Umm. This is going badly.

Ah family.

First of all oops; I kinda forgot that Pizzazz had a thing for Riot. That would make things difficult.

Second of all it was nice to see all of them just spending time.

Third WOW what a romantic way to propose! X3

Aww the bday BBQ and his mom was always such a sweetheart.

Working in the mines is a death sentence but being in the army isn't? Wow.

You write beautifully you know.

Ooh I like this. It's good to see Stormer stand up for herself.

It's a shame you didn't finish this story, it's so good and really well written. You make me care for Stormer, who I like but is not my favorite and for Riot which I really, really don't like. Anyway you are very talented. Hope someday you return to this story.

Ack! So many loose ends! Love the story so far, and I'm really getting into the Riot/Stormer relationship. I know it's been a few years, and the story is likely abandoned; but it would be nice to see how it concludes. It's sad to see such a well-written story unfinished!

Why is it always seem to be the good ones that are never finished? I really loved this fic, you made the characters really come to life and you did the impossible by making me like Riot. Thanks for sharing.

I was really hoping that you would be able to finish this fanfic. I really love Stormer and her personality, when she's not being a push over, she is adorable.
So yeah, I hope you update it!

I know that it has been a few years since you have updated, but please, please, please, please, PLEASE update! I need to know what will happen! I' am going to be obsessing over this forever until it is!

omfg I KNOW IT HAS BEEN OVER CLOSE TO 5 YEARS SINCE THIS HAS BEEN UPDATED, BUT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP IT GOING ;A; I'm like sitting and re-reading this crying my eyes out at how beautiful and heart-wrenching it is! Please?

This is an amazing story, turning a kid's cartoon into a legitimate story. It is "truly truly truly outrageous." I've loved the development of Stormer and Riot's personalities throughout, all of it believable. Hope it isn't abandoned, but I would like to know if it was.