It should be "The dead are able to watch the living...". The term "undead" normally refers to things like vampires, zombies, and inferi.

During the Marauders era, Potions was taught by Horace Slughorn, and Care of Magical Creatures was taught by Silvanus Kettleburn. Also, McGonagall has two Ls.

I like your writing and Harry's reactions. I also like Remus' connection in all of this. I don't really like Ginny, but that's nothing new. And I'm sorry but I hate your Hermione. She just too "smart" and not in a good way. More in the "I'm better than you and school is the only reason for my existence". Which again is more of a personal opinion thing. But damn if it isn't annoying. It would be fine if she was so Book smart because she was actually interested in it instead of just doing it so that she'll be good with school and all that, it makes her seem like she's just trying to be the best. But that was canon Hermione too and again kind of just preference. I do kind of wish you would do more with Ron though (I kind of wish writers would do more with him, yes he's not the best but still). Anyway all the negatives aside, this is really good. I mean even though those things make me want to stop all of the good stuff still keeps me here so the good stuff is really awesome. Like your writing. And Harry and Remus, and their interactions with each other and Dumbledore. Things like that.

This is good with a capital G

Try and get Snape mixed in

ok this is pretty cool so far! Soooo do they ever find out about harry and the older Remus? that would be a funny encounter. you know what would be cool though? Harry protecting them from a death eater attack and them getting to see him really duel. Well I can't wait to see where this goes so PLEASE update soon!

u have 2 continu this is torture like the killing curse slowly letting me die (was that dramatic?;)

this was really good. please update soon!

This story gets better the more I read it! Keep it up'

interesting...

I really like this story, but you need a beta very badly. And an update and a confirmation that you did not give up on this would be nice too. I Hope James and the others find out the truth about Harry, That he is his son I mean. Please continue, I really am enjoying this. Later dude.

its a great story, but you REALLY need to edit. there are a lot of mistakes. BTW-you said that the marauders are in sixth year and seventh year. which one is it?

Come on! I've been waiting for you to update for, like, forever! Well, not forever, but still!

LOL! JK!

But seriously! Update soon! This is a really good story!

Love it! update soon

update soon!

*comicrileef*