Ah. Neji's last line sent fuzzy wuzzy bunnies cartwheeling in my stomach. Yosh!

D'awwww, I adored chapter three. XD So sweet.

Interesting style, it definitely kept the quick pace, but this style seems a little forced. But it was a refreshing read!

Wahh! dont insult shikamaru! he wouldn't give meaningless gifts in the first place!

In the beginning, I was wary of reading this because I'm not the greatest fan of happy ever after endings, but then I finished it and I decided that I lved it!

Sorry, can you clear up if Yashamaru is a female/male? It keeps changing!

I had never really though of the sannins working as a team. good job in its originality!

the beginning was inspiring! Love the way it repeats the waited part, then the italics!

I prefer Nejiten to any other pairings, and this was a pretty good one! No grammatical errors at all! In regards to the disclaimer, I totally agree!

I love it when you praise sakura's growth! Lol

:) sasuke has never been able to show his emotions around sakura, other annoyance (one of the traits I hate) but here is proof tht he loves her more than his own life :)

this is so heartbreakin! But at the same time I love it! Especially how you portrayed sakura, as the sun, forever out of reach 3

it seemed like the story of sakura, sasuke, and naruto, but the sannin's seem much closer than tht :) I like wat uve done here :)

sometimes it pisses me off tht he never tells her his feelings for her, but you made this super cute!

:) love it :)