Is could need a little more drama and romance

3 loved it

*speechless*

That was beautiful.

Beautifully written. The style that you used in this tory reminds me of an author I read back in high school.

great oneshot.

Hey, wow I like it. Hints at some spiritual connection between the two- their opposing strengths. Excellent, as ever!

Very nice; I love the beautiful phrasing. Though when I first read it, I thought the narrator was Aeris. Oops.

Interesting. Very deep and well written.

Damn, but that was good. I spent the entire fic trying to figure out who was speaking. At first I assumed Cloud, and pretty much continued to assume him even though it didn't quite fit. Clone 1 indeed. Awesome idea. The writing here is impeccable and the sexual imagery brilliant. Awesome fic Ardwynna.

Clone No. 1? Who the hell is that? I thought Clone No. 1 was Sephiroth, so the narrator can't be talking about himself...ohh wait! He is! Brilliant! I think that's it isin't it? This fanfic seems like it's sexual but it's not...it's a Sephiroth internal battle?

hey! that was good. kinda short though.. lol

Very well written and I truly loved it. It was just worded beautifully and I give you my praise for it. :3 *gives nummy candies and cookdies*

Who is Clone no. 1?

I thought it might be Aeris, but hm...

UNtil I know, I can't really judge it, can I?

M, good writing; can't wait to see more of your work.

I can't believe people had to be outright _told_ who the characters were though! I figured it out between the fourth- and third-to-last paragraphs! Ah well, I watch so much anime I guess I'm just more used to picking up subtleties.

Matao,

BloodRaevynn

Wow, that was both creepy and beautiful at the same time. Awesome work!

Awesome, just awesome. You write first person very well. -