Reviews for Retaliation
Fearless Rider chapter 3 . 4/13/2014
So great! Laughed way too much and my roommate is staring at me like I'm crazy. I liked the second chapter best, but that's because I'm a massive Seiya fan. :)
Kimmie-chan chapter 3 . 3/25/2006
LOL that was so funny! I loved how 'H' turned out to be Hotaru! Never saw it coming! It's unfortunate to hear that you might not continue more of this series, i thoroughly enjoy them...
Meomun chapter 3 . 2/2/2006
those three stories are too funny. especially the last one with "H" lol :)
auraluna7 chapter 1 . 2/1/2006
Lovely! But I seriously doubt Haruka won't get even soon...
NeoQueenSerenity0289 chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
rock on i lov emichiru stories im her numbwer 2 i say nimber two b/c number 1 is just plain creepy
Rushingwind chapter 3 . 11/7/2005
You are brilliant and this series is SO hilarious!

I have been laughing throughout the whole reading~

Ruka is so cute while she is jealous! I can't believe I didn't read you fics sooner~ I LOVE seeing Ruka green with envy!

M&M: I can't believe our cool Ruka spent hours under those thorn bushes just to spy on Mamoru and Michi~*Lol* And I do think that she was kind of over-reacted about the "putting arms around Michi" thing. But that "Explain it to my Space Sword, Romeo." line is perfect! I am glad that Mamoru can get away alive afterward. This Ruka is "utterly adorable" indeed.

S&M: I can't believe Seiya blackmailed Ruka into doing this(Ha!)However, if not for that matter, Ruka will never agree to let Michi go after the "dressing room issue"! Really bright plot! And that "damn alien bastard" comment from Ruka cracked me up~ Ruka should really think before her leap though. She almost spoiled Three Lights identity! And it backfire pretty quickly- with that "kiss" from Seiya! Poor Ruka now being considered as a "homosexual"(which she is but only wiht Michi though.) It seems to me that Seiya made a bad move~(she should have seen that coming, poor thing!)So long, farewell Three lights~

H&M: Although I knew that H-kun would be Hotaru, this chapter also amused me~ If I were Michi (yeah, right, like I can be this elegant and lucky), I would also hide the truth from Ruka a little bit longer, just to see Ruka's cute cute jealous look!

Bravo! I truly enjoy reading you fics~

I notice that you didn't update for a while, but that's okay, I just want you to know that there is a loyal reader here waiting for you!

From your writting style, I can tell that we like the same kind of H&M fics. It's glad to know that someone like the possessive side of Ruka as much as I do~

Sadly that I can't come up with any idea about the additions to this series~ I will difinitely let you know if I got any inspiration! Ja ne! (I like Japanese too! However, I am not very good at it though.)
shieru chapter 3 . 10/6/2005
This fic had me laughing from the first chapter to the last. XD Especially love your little twist with seiya and haruka. Too funny!

Out of all the HarukaxMichiru fics, this one is among the best. Very refreshing to see a new spin on the pairing. Keep it up.
Xally chapter 3 . 8/20/2005
Hey how abou writing an "somethig & H" fic? so that michiru get a taste of her own medicine? you canuse Makoto, Minako or whoever you please! but make it fun and make michiru act beyond normal thanks to the jeaolusy acting up in her "smart" little head! ok? thank you

P.S I too believe that haruka and Michiru exist "isn't it great!"
SexyBod chapter 3 . 7/12/2005
Such an amusing story! lol. the over-protective haruka and everything is simply adorable and yet hilarious! michiru seems quite popular too...much to haruka's displeasure. great work! and the "H" part was clever, too. keep it up! _
Enchanted Ice Star chapter 3 . 7/7/2005
Oh my goodness, what took me so long in finding this fic? I absolutely adored it with the most adoration I have ever given to any fic! There were so many priceless lines and moments (-cough- the Seiya and Haruka kiss and the mysterious 'H'). I rarely truly enjoy a fic so much (and esp. one with Haruka and Michiru) and I'm going to add this to my favs list ;) I'm very sad that the third chapter is the end of it all but perhaps maybe you can write another chapter concerning that little kid with the crush on Michiru (from some episode in Sailor Moon S I think?). I don't really remember it clearly...I think it had something to do with art class...and Haruka asking Michiru who gave her the roses. Anyway. A jealous Haruka is always a cute Haruka. I really don't think you made them OOC at all. In fact, I thought they were bang on and I could really imagine them saying the things you made them say ;) Hotaru's a cutie in this fic, even if her appearance was short and brief. It was still sweet though. Anyway, awesome job again and your writing style is quite addictive...
Ro chapter 3 . 5/19/2005
Wajajaa, poor Haruka! I love it when she is actin' like crazy! XD, Keep writing, onegai!
Sei-So chapter 3 . 5/18/2005
Ooh, that Haruka always jumping to conclusions.

-"Haruka," Michiru whined throwing back the covers, slightly disoriented. "How come you can't wake me nicely like I do with you?"-

That was a very cute line...in fact most of your lines are very cute! In fact all of you fic is very cute! And lovable. Fun-tastic, really.

It must be hard to come up with add-ons for "...& M" but I hope that doesn't deter you from writing more! You could always have a fic in which Michiru was the jealous one...but she's just to cool, calm, and collected for it...or is she?

Oh, and I did pick up on the StanFURD, what a silly school without a real mascot!
Sei-So chapter 2 . 5/18/2005
Very funny! I like your quirky, little stories! Poor Haruka, you're putting her through so much! I look forward to reading more!
hunter007 chapter 3 . 5/17/2005
Love that story...hope to read more
sHInN chapter 3 . 5/16/2005
wOw.. AwesOme And It was Really FuN! I WAS LAUGHING WITH TEARS CAME OUT FROM MY EYES INTO LAST PARAGRAPH WHEN HARUKA FOUND OUT "H" WAS HOTARU.. !

"FANTASTIC" You dId Nice!

I LIKE THIS CHAPTER.. I MEAN ALL OF THEM!

WERE COOL!

"ME TOO I DIDNT EVEN THINK THOSE PRESENTS WERE FROM HOTARU AS IN "H" You GOt ME mAn!

PLeae WrITe mOre.. I EnJoYed ReadIng Your Fics,,

ARIGATOU!
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