This is really good. I loved the way you wrote it, and am hopeful for a sequel, or maybe another chapter. This has potential. Bye bye, and hope to see more!

Please , update soon ! i hope you haven't abandoned the story ! this really is great ! one of the best i've read so far !

XD Nice story! Hooray for random yaoi! I have yet to actually read the shaman king series, but I plan to soon. I've read volume one and only obscenely remember watching some episodes years ago. XD;; well, I'll remember to think about this fic when I get to that part. XD

i love it. :D

E! *fangirls*

lol...awe...me curious now...what happened?...no! y didn't you write the lemon?...damn...lol, not like i didn't like your story, but adding the lemon is always something good as well... anyways! loved it!~

ja ne!~

jessica!~

good story. is there a continuation?

Intense. I'm not much of a Hao x Yoh fan, but this was good nonetheless. :D Good work.

Well huzzah! Finally a good Shaman King story, I was beginning to loose faith in the whole section.

I like how you get to see a slightly darker side of Yoh in this, whith all the death he deals with it's unlikely that he's the complete innocent everyone makes him out to be. And it was great to see that you didn't pawn Hao off as a one-dimensional character, he feels guilt and he struggles with himself. The last line was very good, made me shudder.

All in all, a great one shot. You have restored my faith in the genre. Thank you.

Nice one. I liked it. Enough said, really.

Is this a one-shot? If it is, can you make it a story please?

Nice limeish story... keep it up!

hm...intersting. i liked it.

So... Hao's gonna kill them anyways? o_o And Yoh got his neck sucked on by the disgusting Hao? Ew. T-T I'm sorry, but I wouldn't do anything with Hao if my own life were in danger. Bleh.. But I'd probably do it if Horo's life were in danger! *huggles Horo-kun* ;P ~Kya