Reviews for Shroud of Deception
ErinKenobi2893 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Wow. This was great! So well done. I love the way you drew them both out. :-)
x Bout as Stable as the Wind x chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Really good! :D
ilmiopassato chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Holy poop. Totally just randomly stumbled onto this today, and I've got to say that's a great piece of writing you've got here. Strong, very in-character, and excellent in so many ways.
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
A great story. Very good.
x Rajah x chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Really really good. What's the sequel called? I will look for it. Called "Sequel"?
Trinity Day chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
I read this when it first came out, didn't review, and have been looking for it ever since. I love this story, the way you write Obi-Wan alone and interacting with Anakin. It's such a powerful story that it's stayed with me for two months.
adrixa chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
This was such a brilliant fanfic!
Penelope Muir chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
This story is brilliant! I loved Obi Wan's reaction to Anakin telling him about Padme. If only there was a scene like this in the movie! I hope you do write a sequel :)
KeiraAchiOkanabe chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Oh wow! You make the words in this story so...poetic and sad. I loved it. I'm a total sap when it comes to sad stories. Will you write more? 'Cause you really really really really really really need to! If you ever get the chance, check out my story called Touched By An Angel, by okanabe. Once again, love it!
iimagineyou chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
This is a really good story. I like how you describe the disturbance that Obi-Wan feels in the Force.

-Jos*/ksc
K9 the First chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Ooh! Oh man I hope that sequel comes out soon!
liz chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
That's really good. I hope you write a sequel.
Pebbles chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Well written with nicely done characterizations.
shina937 chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
SEQUEL!
shina937 chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
SEQUEL!
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