Haha, this made my day! I can see Mika doing that (wanting to touch Grave's face) 'cause she's a kid. And Mika's lie about a bug on Grave's face is just brilliant. And a laughing Grave is just golden. The moment Mika finally blurts out what she intends to do is just...lol. I keep grinning after reading this. Nice work!

I enjoy your fluff. I smiled really big as I was reading this.

It was cute and funny.

Aw, I really liked this one too, it was really cute!

Keep writing Gungrave stories!

~Twilighthippie1 D

Aww... that was so cute! xD

Short, but good

Very nice. Loved it! My "constructive criticism" is -to tell you to write more! lol

i didn't think i would like this story that much after reading the summary (no offense or anything!), but it really was cute. a few parts had me laughing too ;P. anyways, just make sure u update soon k.

AW it's sweet, it really is, some how I can see them doing that... strange...

write more!

I love it. Write more! Sorry, I cannot think of what else to write.

kawaii.

FLUFFY BUNNIES! that was the first thing I said, well yelled actually. my mom thinks I'm phyco mow. (Really, she just laughed...) well, IT ROX!

You did a good job and if you wanted to, could even make it better. Sorry for this comment-I mean well-some of your English is awkward-I figured out what you meant-but that's ok, I speak english and sometimes I make no sense either. You are a good author, keep it up.

Cheryl

That kicks man, way f* 'in better than mine. Sweetness, keep up the good work.

Deadmen, the only guys in the world that get to date a women while they are alive, then date the woman's daughter when they are dead.

I liked, was fluffy.