on chapter six you left out halsey's name quite alot

I like the new chapter, pretty interesting that the forerunners are stepping in in the attack

Fairly good but i found the plotline somewhat disjointed as well as the way you rushed through scenes.

Wow its been so long since I have read your work. amazing, totally and utterly amazing.

Vampires. Wow. Vampires in Halo. Double wow.

A very good,and sad chapter. I beleive you read a helluve lot of anime,like emily,what w/ the vampire thing lol. neway very good though i counted like 4 zairunees in a short amount of sentances.

Great chapter, you took your time to update but what the heck so do I. Anyway keep up the good work.

P.S. You should check my fic called Halo the Secret wars since you like fics with the alliance of the elites with the humans.

sry about my last review,i thought orav was kinda a jerk. I'm such a futz,i cant remember my own phone number,much less characters from a story.

i finally finished it! I had to reread chpt 6 like...five times or something. ANYWAY,good story,i liek the new characters you introduced,though i think Terrumir is a bit of a...jerk?...I guess swearing in russian at him would be as bad as doing it the eenglish,so i wont do it. Anyway,is it over? I couldnt tell,but im gonna guess no. Anyway,continue if not,i like the storyline a lot.

By the twin tailed comet this is a long from that,it sounds good so far,although im only on chapter six. I like your new characters,rocalee sounds pretty awesome,but i expected old Halfie there to be at least 50,elite years,with arbiter at probably 42 elite years. Anyway...good story.

I read your chaptah! *pokes Terrumir* Lol! He was acting so sinister! LOLOL! I was so not expecting that...

Terrumir: Don't be so serious silly! You're to uptight! *pokes again*

Hahaha, sorry Chloe I'm talking to your... um... characters... ;) I shall stop now. :P

Wow... wicked cool, keep this story going, I beg of you.

Wow, it's been quite a while since you last updated. Good job on this chapter. As for Terrumir, I can't say for certain. I'll just wait and find out.

Hey buddy, when will you update.

Its, awsome, though as you said a bit confusing at times.

Keep it up.

Still alive out there?