Reviews for Grief, Deceptions, and Hope for Freedom
Knight4Productions chapter 1 . 7/15
Will you be continuing this story?
FotoDi chapter 27 . 5/16
Neither Harry nor Neville mentioned the intimidatingly large and valuable Basilisk carcass in the Chamber of Secrets... Did either the boys or Professor Binns even visit the Chamber?
Helene Nightfire chapter 30 . 5/7
Drat! I’ve reached the end of what you had. It was fun. I really like the idea of Patronus Pals and was looking forward to the plot lines starting to coalesce. Why are the teachers disappearing at meal times. Has Dumbledore caught on yet? Is he evil or does he have a convoluted ‘good’ justification for his actions? Does Harry have an ally in Snape or is he just pretending? How does Harry get to his re testing and does he get to spend the summer at his mansion?
Inquiring minds are left unsatisfied as their own imagination isn’t up to the task of creating an ending either!
Thanks for sharing what you had.
DaveC chapter 3 . 4/17
Why would Harry spend his money on those two without asking Hermoine started to order books. I’d have told her to go take a walk...still it’s your story.
IloveHeat chapter 30 . 3/30
It was a terrific story. I will imagine that Harry doesn’t get obliviated and gets justice. And I am happy with my storyline. Thank you for sharing this. There were a few elements I have never read in other stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
I keep checking every year to see if you have updated this story and nothing yet. It's brilliant and I would really like to see it finished if possible
Rasenflash chapter 30 . 1/27
Great story please update
Millie072 chapter 11 . 1/8
So time manipulation is cliché; it can add interesting twists to the plot if used sensibly. Having the ghosts conspire with Harry is intriguing. They clearly do not like Dumbles. With Neville entering the chamber, Harry could actually learn a great deal of wizarding customs & law. Great chapter, Thanks
Millie072 chapter 10 . 1/8
Proves Neville is a far better friend than Ron or Hermione. Hermione likely knows nothing of this. Ron may be also as ignorant due to Molly's worship of the "great" manipulator. Dumbles can take the blame. Isn't he dropping classes & gradually dumbing down what's left so the purebloods don't look weak in comparison to muggleborn & halfbloods?
Millie072 chapter 9 . 1/8
Stumbled over this story why browsing. While normally starting an unfinished old novel is a pain I enjoy post OOTP where Harry gets a backbone, becoming the character portrayed in the previous books. This is more than worth the chance. "Grief" is growing more engrossing with each chapter. There are enough twists & turns to keep a reader hooked. Made it to chapter 9 & realized no reviews. My apologies for not reviewing earlier. If you're willing to spend time writing, I should be willing to review. Thanks for an incredible story. And now back to it. Thanks
Tracey Young chapter 30 . 12/14/2019
I hope you return to this story.
mumphie chapter 30 . 9/25/2019
Oh I hope that you can find a jogging at your mind and remember this story. It is good. I have thoroughly enjoyed it! I want to see more! I hope real life hasn't gotten you down.
There are just soooo many questions - here are just a few!
Will Harry ever tell Hermione that she needs to see a healer because of her constant use of the time turner?
When will they take the animagus potion, and will Ron and Hermione be ticked off that THEY didn't do it too?
Where will Harry live during the summer? The mansion or Privet Drive?
Where have Dumbles and McGonagall been?
Will Dumbles try to forestall Harry from retaking his tests?
Can Harry get Sirius back? (I hope you can)
Who can Harry trust?
Will his relatives be a tad nicer after they get the Patronus Pals?
I like that Harry and Neville will get better grades on their tests - will that make Hermione unbearable?
mumphie chapter 1 . 9/25/2019
sniff
Akatsuki's Kyuubi chapter 30 . 8/21/2019
Soooo Funny!
HadrianaBlack chapter 30 . 6/21/2019
Please, please come back! This was so good!
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