This is so heart breaking. I read Love Thy Enemy, and still get the closure I was looking for

Wow, I wasn’t expecting that. I actually read the story after Love Thy Enemy and it all makes sense now, funny how I read your stories backwards. Really enjoyed both, still in complete shock of this one.

I hate this story. I loved the writing and stuff. but what in the actual fuck

isnt this a toxic.. relationship..?

Holy shoot! I binged this all day today and may I just say my feelings are WRECKED and I’m crying right now. All i wanted was an hour or so break from studying and suddenly I was hit with the feels. You are an AMAZING writer. I will definately read more of your works. Thanking you so much for blessing the world with your masterpiece.

All she’s thinking of at this point is peeing and chamber pots for the first 3 chapters.

Nobody touches her but me, understand?

That perverted pirate! I explect no less from one, but honesty, A LITTLE MANLY HONOUR WOULD DO YOU GOOD.

Disgusting.

I just don't even know what to say. I couldn't stop reading l, I just had to know how everything was going to turn out. it couldn't be a peaceful ending nor one with hope, but it was damn fine.
This story gripped me and just wouldn't let go. It was one of those captivating stories that you just immerse yourself into and rush towards the end even though you can't bear to think of the ending. Even though parts of the premise we're difficult to accept it was a magnificent story.

The fact that you wrote this while actively watching the show was also great! To see how things became in your world as the developed in canon, very nice.
Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us!

Damn. Can’t believe Katara just straight up told the prince to sleep on the couch. Big dick energy right there

Love! rikishu vs zuko, it felt like I was watching a damn action movie.

Hello :) This is a strange experience for me. As a guest and your 2,012th reviewer, I don't know if you'll ever see this and if you do you'd have no way to respond. As those in 2011 once said, "YOLO."
I was eight years old when you published this, and I'm currently twenty-one and a university student. I watched this series from the very first episode till it ended a decade ago, and re-watched it recently, which is why I find myself in this corner of for the first time.
As I'm sure you, the author, have since learned, this story deviates wildly from the original series, so for anyone coming in now...prepare yourself.
I read this story in one day and literally laughed out loud when Sokka stabbed someone. This story is messed up, the "love" Zuko and Katara have for each other makes no sense whatsoever, Iroh is an old pervert, it's painfully 2005, and I love it dearly.
I will be reading your other stories now, dear author. Thank you for welcoming me into the fandom so warmly.

Ok, I don’t know if u still read these reveiws or not, but i don’t care because i feel like i have a duty to tell you how phenomenal this story is. Because it is - truly.
I read it awhile ago and couldn’t put it down. i had never been a huge avatar fan, but i saw zuko and katara and i was like “wouldn’t that be interesting...” the first fanfic i picked up from them (and the only bc this is the best) was this one.
I just read through some of the recent reveiws and i was appalled! excuse u, have you ever been in an abusive relationship? no? ok, then please be quiet, because i personally loved the psychological warfare. it was intriguing! it wasn’t your normal romance because they aren’t your normal couple. call it whatever you want - stockholm syndrome or whatever - but those two crazy kids loves each other. it never would have worked out, but at the end of the day, they loved each other.
I think, while the ending did make me cry, it had to happen. there wasn’t any other alternative. no matter how much katara “loved” and was weakened by him, she wouldn’t go as far as to expect happy ever after with what he went on to do. it just couldn’t happen. they kept arguing, he kept hitting her, and she kept forgiving him. the they would argue again and lie and sabotage themselves over and over and over. anyone who says that katara shouldn’t have died, fine. you can say that. but u can’t say that they should have had their happily ever after, because as much as i would have liked to see it wrapped up all nice and neat with a little bow on top, that’s not how that works.
now, as for katara, i don’t think that loving zuko made her any less of a strong character. it was her resistance to that and her forgiveness and her morality that made her a strong character. It was her very character in and of itself that made her strong. Yes, she let herself get hit and yes she kept forgiving him, but emotions are a crazy thing and they’re what make us human. and that’s all they were: human. they couldn’t be together in the end, but don’t tell me that katara isn’t a strong character because she got hit - she’s a strong character because she came back from being hit and still forgave him nonetheless. I think that takes a lot of strength (and a bit of hormones).
They were two broken souls. both of them. and i know you might not read these anymore, but u need to know that even if i’m not a devoted member of this fandom, this is my favorite fan fiction that i’ve ever read and i keep coming back to it over and over again. you’re a fantastic writer and you have a gift for character insight - great job. keep writing.
- leah

she is bipolar, mental patient.

That was the saddest story I've ever read! that was an evil way to end it!

Geeze! Is zuko ever going to change?! I don't like him being so cold hearted!