The idea was good but I just could not get past the writing. Editing is your friend.

i loved this story.

filled with drama/agnst and romantic.

very good job.

Lovely story! Breathtaking! Brilliant! lol. really, it was pretty amazing. i was hooked- i finished it in 2 days :)

now, off to go look at ur other stories.. PS: ur an excellent writer. if u didn't get that from the beginning adjectives haha...

Your summary sounded very interesting, and I was rather excited to start reading this, because this is the type of Dramione that I prefer to read. However, I am also one who is a bit picky with their grammar... If something isn't written in the right way, it makes it difficult for me to read, because it wasn't the way I was taught to read it... It's as if my brain doesn't like to process the mistakes.

However, even though I didn't read past the first 10 lines or so, I would like to say that this sounds like an amazing story. Also, in no way did I intend to offend you with this review.

Good luck with the story and I hope that many enjoy it!

last time i checked none of the characters in the harry potter books were scitzos

i THOUGHT YOU HAD A RATHER CUTE ENDING

i loved it great work!

Well, this is where I stop.

The story needs to be believable and believing that Hermione is kidnapped, stabbed, has blood collected from her, and then returned to school where she doesn't immediately go to Dumbledore is a bit too far fetched. She just goes to bed? I know she is 17, but there is no way she is that dumb.

You slipped up on the last sentence of the second to last paragraph. You wrote, "The colors in her room were red and gold with a large Gryffindor emblem on my bed."

To maintain consistency with your point of veiw, the sentence should read, "The colors in her room were red and gold with a large Gryffindor emblem on her bed."

omg! This is such a kewl story! It is so sad, and it got me crying... Keep up the great work! ]

okay so I haven't finished this chapter but I have to say I LOVE MANCALA!

Hey! I really enjoyed reading your story! It was great! I felt sorry for Draco though...his dad beating him and him disappearing like that and I of course felt bad for Hermione too! Your characters were great and Ron was just well Ron! It was good story!

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! It is BEAUTIFULLY written. I tried so hard not to cry on this last chapter. Great job!

Oh my god. This story made me cry so much. You are a very good author and your story made me feel like I was there.

umm... YOU NEVER MADE IT!