| Reviews for The Primal Primate |
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juaniu1994 chapter 16 . 5/29/2019 Will you update? I |
Kyuubi-Titan chapter 16 . 10/25/2018 I started reading this fiction years ago. Glad yo see theres more updates. Keep writing homie. Always liked your work. I know life gets in the way. |
SWDarkstone chapter 16 . 5/19/2018 Interesting. I can honestly say I did not see this story taking this turn when I started reading it. You managed to surprise me. Nicely done. |
JohnnyHandsome chapter 16 . 3/10/2018 Strange Confusing Dumb Etc at First it seemed interesting but then you started to do the worst Romance Scenes ever and Then Kim being possessed with absolutely no one suspecting anything and the stupid way Ron acts with the Monkey Spirit that doesn't make any sense i got say this fic should stay dead unless it's properly fixed |
hmclrk chapter 1 . 2/5/2018 Back on your response to mooncat. He did not reinvent being shot down. He reinvented shooting himself down. One disappointment for me is the series left Ron with a self-esteem issue. Like the way you handled Kim's response to Ron's refusal to answer her question. Yes, they have a strong enough relationship to have rough spots and still stay friends. And for Daryl's statement. Just because two people of the same sex have a strong reaction to each other DOES NOT mean they are closet homosexuals trying to suppress a mutual attraction. Lots of homosexuals DO NOT get along with other homosexuals. The person's values override sexual preferences. SAME AS EVERYBODY. |
hdannym chapter 16 . 9/13/2015 Please continue, please. |
SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan chapter 16 . 8/21/2014 Interesting, albeit a little strange and confusing. |
GhostWhiter chapter 16 . 10/18/2013 Interesting story. Not anything like the typicall "Ron matures and the young ladies that surround him start to take notice tale." You've provided some clues of how the Monkey Fist/Demonic possession plot is going to come together, though I'm unsure of why Bonnie would be the one "pure" enough to wield the fire sword (or how she's going to get the opening to use it) because there are still glimpses of the "old" Bonnie to be seen (wouldn't accompany Ron because someone might see her with him) and even she seems to be unclear on her motives. I'm also mystified by Tara's actions and I am curious to see how you resolve her reasoning. I hope you decide come back to this and finish the tale. Thanks for the great read. |
rjkeith chapter 16 . 5/23/2013 Dude just found this story and I must say that it's really good. I usually don't read to many stories with Ron as the main character in the KP section (I'm usually read Kigo fics and some Kibo fics. There is the rare ones that have KiBoGo fics and Kim/Ron/Go but those are rare) I must say that this is a pretty good story. I love when people write about Bonnie and showing that what is shown in the show is a type of mask that she wears to protect herself. Keep up the good work and cudos on the section that has Shego talking about burgers, fries, and poop XD |
StarSlinger chapter 16 . 4/5/2013 This is a great sotry, hope you continue to updated until it is finished! |
bigherb81 chapter 16 . 2/13/2013 Awesome update to the story, since I already read it again and asked my questions last chapter I'm pretty caught up. Although I am curious as to if Monique and Zita will follow suit in naming their escorts. Can't wait for the next installment and really wanna see how it turns out with the magic monkey stick. |
chica13 chapter 16 . 2/12/2013 Yay! An update! |
bigherb81 chapter 15 . 2/5/2013 Man finally got thru, had to re-read the story in order to get a refresher. Good stuff so far love how you captured Monty's cockiness always so much sweeter when he gets it handed to him in the end. Also never really liked British high class types. Question though why didn't Yori contact Ron sooner? I mean if Michael is the target shouldn't she have jumped in and explained things to Ron sort of nip things in the bud so to speak? I mean not being able to reach him on the phone she should have just broke into his house again. Well I'm sure that gets explained in the next chapter or later ones so I guess it's just wait and see on my end. So in closing awesome chapter enjoyed it immensely looking forward to what's next. |
Jay chapter 15 . 1/19/2013 Omg! Thanks for the update! :) It was a really good chapter and I can't wait till the next one! And I'm glad that you acknowledged that men can get raped by women (it seems many people aren't aware of it or don't consider it rape). |
Xde009 chapter 15 . 1/21/2013 Wow great fic, just read all the fic in one night. |