The imagery was absolutely beautiful and so very vivid. Probably one of my favorite reno/cloud fics I've read.

Wow... Simply wow... The way this is written and described feels so melancholic... Everything is described beautifully and the metaphors are oddly fitting... Definetely one of my favorites now.

I absolutely score this story. I come back to re-read it every year or so. It's beautifully written.

So sad and poignant I like it.

Your story was beautifully poignant. So muted yet moving. I don't quite understand how you made Cloud's distance and Reno's persistence so sweet and sad it opened a wound in me. I am sad but satisfied, and sometimes with just a touch of optimism for them both. Lovely, thank you.

This is so beautiful! I love the way it really fits into AC!Cloud's there-not-there-semi-lost-perspective. It's really well written and the way you have Cloud avoiding/piecing together/being surprised by his own actions, completely fits him. Reno is just as well done; I love his way of not-exactly-pressuring Cloud but rather... annoying him into confronting things? Tee hee. You really make it work with them together.

I really really loved this.

'At some point, you wonder when Zack got his name back and someone else became the ubiquitous he in your thoughts and life.' is my favorite sentence in this work. I'm impressed by your ability to say so much with so little words. Thanks for writing this. I love it.

This is gorgeous. And the fact that you wrote it in second person so beautifully? So admirable.

Wow, this is wonderful! :)

Who would have ever thought it would be Reno to teach Cloud to take an interest in living again. Spectacular story.

Oh my goodness this is wonderful... It leaves e absolutely breathless. Really, WOW. Amazing job.

That was so cute .!

Zack...he DIES! But I'm glad at least Reno and Cloud live.

I ABSOLUETLY LOVE THIS STORY!

Keep writing~

So sad but so great.

One of my favorites for sure.

Keep writing, you're good :D

I read this story a while ago but i'm just now catching up on leaving a review. You did a wonderful job here. Your descriptiveness is great, and each word of this story is almost like poetry. Great, great job. Keep up the good work.

Really good story! :D