Update soon...

hehe I can't wait to see Ron's reaction! Well it moves kinda fast but it get's straight to the point doesn't it? lol well great story and update soon!

I like it it was to quick to run through things like some people do, but it wasn't drawn out. I hope there will be more, as for the fluff with kim and ron it was good, you 4 play was good you did wrap up the ending quick though for the end of their sex scene that could have been longer. Just a thought. My thoughts are that romances and adult sitiches (sex) humanizes the characters more gives people a different side of them, but that my thoughts. Over all I really liked it so far, keep it up and remember to try to rush things.

wow how romantic and kinky all at the same time...write more plz and while your at it why dont you write a response in an email. internet.

thanks for the best KP

Umm...ok...Not really what I was expecting...Alot of work with spelling and gammer, but the idea was alright...

LOL...Um "Kim kept fussing over Ron taking it essay and" So she wanted him to take it friendly...?

Umm, first you might want to work on the spelling...Alot of things were spelled wrong or there were a few double takes...'There was there was' sort of thing...But over all interested into seeing the rest of the story...

Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)

I love chapter 5 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.

I AM LOVING YOUR STORY AND BY ALL MEANS PUT YOUR SEX SEEN IN IT WONT BOTHER ME NONE. ANY WAYS KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK :)

It's fine with me. So go right ahead.

I love this Story I hope you update it. It would be so awsome! I LOVE IT!

THIS STORY IS BITCHEN! I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Please update, don't make me send your soul to the shadow relm... I will... don't temp a crazy person (laughs maniaclly)

hahaha Funny ! i dont kno what to say!