Very well written, but definately not a fic for me. You definately have a way with words tho.

awwww

This has been on here for ten years and I keep coming back to read it every time I re-watch Naruto. I love it - very interesting take on their sibling dynamic, very beautifully written, nicely rounded... Yeah, I love this fanfic a lot, thank you for sharing it

my heart aches. this is beautiful.

wow

this is so SAD. I almost cried!

I adored the glimpse of the Sand Sibs family life, especially that bit with Temari and Kankarou and their father.

This was a nice story to be written in such a short amount of time. I liked all of the different perspectives, from all three siblings. It was kind of sad that Gaara seemed to be left out though. Aw...but it was still nice. Good job! _

Very interesting; it has a dark, balanced rhythm.

That was so cute! I love all the different perspectives, it's great and so cute!

Cute. Very, very cute!

aww, so sweet and sad. I really liked this fic. You're such a great author!

Oh... very nice! I really love well-done Sandcest, and that was very sweet. Sad, too, because of Gaara being on the outside, but really well written.

Beautifully written! The imagery in this is so powerful. I really like your work.

Keep it up!

Hm...Normally I find incest to be a little...creepy, but I liked this one. xD I've always found the Sand Siblings to be intriguing, and I wouldn't put incest past them.