Naruto murdering everybody is overused? You know what's even more overused? Naruto not murdering everybody.

Why did you have to stop? Why? I loved this story.

Inconsistent characterization. You have Naruto portrayed in way too many characterizations. Fuck off.

this was going really good as far as fan fics go but then you started doing way to much canon with itachi and rasengan training and became boring really fast. Instead of focusing more on his supremacy and expanding on them more, you went into rasengan training and it became canon. You also made him panic attack after kisame stole kyuubi's chakra which is even more stupid, only to have Jiraiya show up and summon a toad to stop Samehada...not you best idea. Once that happen you brought a OC and named him "Ancient" and I lost it. It's been a fun ride until this chapter and I have to say that I expected more from you after 7 chapters.

Interesting story

Great story please continue it soon

is it kyuunaru or in this case narukyuu

ohhhhh I get it the pairing is not used commonly kyuubis a girl here and now you say that she is more of an "other"

the only thing that makes me uncomfortable about this story is that the kyuubi is female and she's apparently having sex with naruto? i really don't understand why the people in this fandom love pairing a 12 year old with way older women, and make it a sexual relationship as well. it's so uncomfortable and weird

Duuuude please continue this story it's fucking amazing also the ancient also known as yashka kind a reminds me of the outsider from dishonored but in all seriousness please truly continue this it's very rare I find great fan fiction stories nowadays

dude plothole didn't naruto cut off nejis arm

Damn people really love this story and i thought it would be a great read. It's quite a well thought out idea the only problem I have with it is the fact that you have created a naruto who is over powered which isn't bad in itself it's just the simple fact that he is so intent on keeping his talents hidden. It becomes a bit too cannon compliant. Although I only did reach chapter 6. But I couldn't bear to read anymore. It got a bit too boring for me

I knew coming into this story that you stopped writing for quite some time but I'm completely hooked and will be more than happy to have you update sometime in the near future. Thank you for writing kyuubi the way you did, I'm not really a fan of gender bent kyuubi buy when she's a strong stable character I'm all for it. Overall though the story kinda got a little meta, this had to be one of THE best Naruto fanfics I've read in a long time. Again thanks for writing.

I dont normally review the stories I read, however, in this case, I felt that I needed too. This story, that you wrote all those years ago.. is incredible. Thank you for the great read. I wish that you wrote chapter 16 because the parts where this dark/grey naruto comes back with an enormous power up to Konoha is the part I was waiting for lol. Thanks again.

I’m disappointed.