Reviews for Loss
ray chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
hate
Unknown Pupil chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
It's a sweet little drabble. I'm such a sucker for cute drabbles.
The Unknown chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
That was a cute story. Too bad there isn't a lot on this pairing.
Robindf1 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
It's an okay story. It's technically well contructed, but it feels oddly worded, especially for Scar. Keep writing.
Maya H chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
awe i love it! very sweet. -
jeanpaul chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
oh i like it a lot and wise ther were more al scar parring in ff.n but hay that all i can hope for i like this a lot good job
Heartless Little Thing chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Kyaa! I absolutely adore Scar x Al (whines) But it's so rare, dadgummat! X/! Thanks for writing one! I'm lovin' and reviewin' it, even if this is... old. _; Heh.
MosesRecinly42 chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
o...very awesome...this is one'a my favourite pairings. very awesome story, id love to read more from you!

*adds to favourites*
Hasuko chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
O... Scar? Jealous? *giggle* I totally loved it. I never knew Scar could have so much feelings for a single person, especially Al. (Not that I'm complaining. *sly grin*) I like the way you make Scar so um... protective over Al. I wish he could have said that in the anime. (Yeah, right. Not even in my dreams.) I hate loving Scar x Al. Please, PLEASE write more Scar x Al fics, The Rabid Toenail-san! I can't possibly be the only one craving for more Scar x Al-goodness.
Shale 101 chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
Cool_
TheSilentThief chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
Cute fic. I'm a fairly new Fullmetal fan, but I like it.
Dustwind chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
Hm. I liked it. It seemed a little out of character for Scar to feel that way toward Al (simply because Al's an alchemist, too, and Scar generally has other things to be concerned with, such as being a fugitive) but then Al is VERY different from his brother. I think Scar is actually kind of confused as to how he feels toward the brothers, like he doesn't want to hurt them but feels he's forced to...

Anyways, back to the topic. Nice to see a more sensitive side to the man, because a lot of times people just reduce him to a mindless villain, which is not the case at all.

So, the pairing was different, but I can see it. Thumbs up!
Bakuras-Hell chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
awh! so kawaii! - Poor Scar-sama...lol
futomi chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
hm...it's interesting. it recounts the event, but I can kind of sense the flat disappointment in Scar's tone...it's good.

and the way you've written it, it's feasible...(I stand by winry x al...)

scar talked like a girl would. or so I think, anyway. :shrug: but, you wrote something! hooray! D