| Reviews for MCABADSS part2 Avatar Rising |
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   Rhyno Holter chapter 12 . 8/19/2007 Good... this better not be the end, though. Remember me? So, review my Fable story again. I redid the 9th chapter, made it better. Hope you like it. |
| Lotrdude chapter 12 . 2/14/2006 Very cool, very emo, very McBadass. |
| NaverdroL chapter 12 . 1/11/2006 What a freaky ass chapter! Words in blood appearing on the wall, that was pretty creepy. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| seda chapter 12 . 1/1/2006 man i just got back on this site after a while and find people being dicks to me i think i was fair in my OPPNION about a mere fable...jack asses...i hope to see this up again |
| Kendoka Girl chapter 12 . 12/11/2005 Oh, Nahadia certainly gave me a creepy feeling. Wow, he was out for a week? Good stuff, keep it up. I'd like to see your album expansions. :) |
| Isuma chapter 11 . 12/7/2005 ahh good to see you back hope to see some more ownageness |
| Kendoka Girl chapter 11 . 12/6/2005 Nice action here and you really build up the intrigue well! Glad you updated. |
| NaverdroL chapter 11 . 12/4/2005 Wow! this is some great stuff. sorry that I didn't get around to reading your story so soon but I was writing my story, yup three chapters over the weekend I was pretty busy. |
| Isuma chapter 10 . 9/27/2005 hm maybe i shall update lol i plan to soon but uh...i dunno good chap though...and hmm more dead characters of yours i get to use? lol |
| Kendoka Girl chapter 10 . 9/25/2005 Your writing is really coming along. I loved your descriptions, especially the throne room and the fight between Burning Star and Silver. Keep up the good work. |
| Lotrdude chapter 9 . 8/29/2005 HAHAHAHA! _ excerpt: "How old are you?" "Sixteen. Why?" "Damnit!" - HAHAHAH! if that means what i think it does it was hilarious. Anyway, pretty good chapter, but kinda short and nothing really happened. (p.s. why arnt i on the fans list? : ( |
| Lotrdude chapter 8 . 8/29/2005 Sweetness! DUDE! that was a really good chapter. There wasn't to much fighting and it's always good to have all the charecters have a sit and get hammered once and a while. Nice. But dude youve got WAY to many charecters at once. It's just hard, as a reader, to keep up with it all. But really. It was good. |
| Isuma chapter 9 . 8/29/2005 sorry i was on vacation but good chapter...s i like the new setting...and im gonna try to read tayters stories |
| A mind with a good taste chapter 9 . 8/28/2005 bah...this the most populare story? Sir, you really need to improve your spelling, you should, cause it is disturbing. |
| mark twenty chapter 9 . 8/25/2005 Not at all. It is actually done smoothly, after all, you are not the only one with love in their Fable story. |
