Why the fuck is a car in this story?

dafuq is wrong with u
or as i should say *JACKIE CHAN MEME* DAFUQ?

This is a pretty good fanfic. It's WAY better than some that I've seen. You have a few capitalization errors, but those are all minor mistakes. You have some run on sentences, but there aren't many. do you have a beta?

Nanashi-chan

when are you going to update again.

wow.. sandaime sent naruto away.. n naruto never experienced village hate.. and kyuubia summon guardian? wow that's different! and since naruto n haku n jill r leaving that village, where r they gonna go now?. did sandaime even remember naruto's existence?

So sad

P.s. jack and jill went up the hill to fetch a peal of water

It is so grate I love it

hey, u never told us wat naruto wears. u only said he had a black cloak nd black gloves, u never specified wat the cloths looked like. i seriously doubt he goes around streaking in only a cloak nd gloves

there arent many good hakuxnarus and this is awsome i like haku being a blacksmith and kisame and itachi but put in more fighting

how cute TT are you going to update anytime soon? I especially like the parody of kyuubixitachi and how kisame is the only one able to translate what hes saying TT

aw im so sad that it has been such a long time since your last update... ; ;

reminds me of Moses... Kinda funny really... Wonder if he'll return to lead them or destroy them?

interesting fic so far.

haku's reactions were so CUTE!

an i think kisame left out the part where itachi called him a glutton

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I'm trying my damnedest to ignore the fact that you pumped out the names Jack and Jill. I'm digging the story, but those names are completely and totally idiotic. You could have at least put SOME thought into it.

Great Chapter