this was a great story i loved it, so great Wes didn't end up selling them out! I was worried for a minute their, and Glad Angel and Buffy ended up together.

Wondering if you descided to write an Angel's Twelve, lol, i'm gonna look...

loved the explaination of everyones backgrounds. Spike being addicted to Heroin in not that much of a leap, surprisingly.

I have noticed a few instances where you have collectively refered to faith and Gwen as the Malloy's, and i just notcied again that you have refered to Parker as Benedict.

Just a minor thing. The rest of this story is getting interesting.

I haven't actually watched this movie, i know about it though. Love what you've done so far, kinda wondering if you will put Buffy in as Angel's ex

Love it! U should also do Ocean's 12 and 13!

I absolutely LOVE it! Hahaha!

Though you could have put in an epilog of whatever everyone did with thier money.

Loved it!

Nice. Very, very nice.

First off, let me congratulate you on the way you rationalized the BtVS and Angel series', so that the characters could easily fit into the "Eleven" roles. Kinda ironic about the 'gangs on PCP' line actually being true here, but your summary hewed so closely to the actual storyline that for a while I thought it was an in-universe explanation - how the various events were interpreted by someone on the "outside". I think it was somewhere in Angel's biography that I finally realised what you were actually doing.

Speaking of plots, the trouble with doing an adaptation of a movie with other characters like this is staying close to the story without giving up suspense. Your subplot with Wesley and Morgan added quite a bit of uncertainty to the ending, while allowing you to otherwise mostly stick to the events of the film. (Even to the point of duplicating it's biggest plot hole: How did the guys get the hooker flyers down into the vault?)

Finally, I want to applaud your choice of Buffy/Angel characters to fill the various "Eleven" roles. I knew almost immediately that Spike was going to be Basher, and thought the role you gave Xander curiously apt. Especially given the whole Anya thing ("Pregnant again . . . "). ;-)

Once again, I gotta say that I enjoyed this story a lot. Great job.

*Cries softly* Poor Darla. I suppose she had to die, just like she did in the show. Yay for Connor! Love him already.

Holly!

Sorry, fanboy moment. I almost jumped for joy when I saw her in the movie, and I'm glad to see she made it into the fanfic as well. Chapter three now.

Awesome! Love Angel as Ocean, lol. And Parker was an interesting choice for the antagonist (I personally would've gone with Scott Hope, but then again I've always kind of liked Parker). Onto chapter two now.

Just finished this and it was so much fun! Love the twists and turns and of course Angel and Buffy getting back together again is delicious icing on the cake.

Great chapter! Keep up the good work!

Okay please say you are going to to pull an Angel's 12 and 13 cause I can see a lot of places to go with this and all of them rock

An excellent ending. Poor Lilah. She's in BIG trouble. Will you be doing Angel's Twelve? If so, I'd love to see Lindsey & Kate in it. Kate could be the Catherine Zeta-Jones character.