| Reviews for Occisor |
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TimeofMagic75 chapter 6 . 1/14/2010 please update! I luv it! |
faya27 chapter 6 . 6/19/2007 Please continue writing! I also, hope to see more r/s fluff! _ |
you know who chapter 6 . 8/16/2005 Are you kidding? Why did you stop writing it? I LOVE IT! and i dont think you ruined the characters, thats you being too, um, whats the word... picky? you know what i mean! i demanf another chapter! :-O |
X-and-Y chapter 6 . 8/8/2005 ek! you havent updated in so long! please please update soon! i love you story its great. keep writing. bia |
Jampaqd chapter 6 . 7/22/2005 Yay. I love it. Cyborg/Vic and Bee make THE BEST COUPLE EVER. |
Zoe Saugin chapter 6 . 6/4/2005 OHH! I like it. Are there gonna be more murders, or something? |
Hello DZ chapter 6 . 5/16/2005 This is a cool story |
Fireyfly chapter 6 . 5/4/2005 Ha! That was way cool! I loved the whole Neopolitin (sorry, I really have spelling issues) ice cream dealy. I'm glad that you had a Dick/Kori, Bee/Viv AND! Gar/Rae moment in there! Not to mention you brought back the whole mystery subject. I'd say you'd accomplished a lot in this chappie! Oh, one question though, why would a guy sitting in the dark have to wear a mask? It is pretty sexy though :) Keep up the good work! |
Rose chapter 6 . 5/3/2005 Ice cream fight? I'll be sure to use that. I wonder if it's as fun as a cake fight.. don't ask. well, you can, but it might be a bit embarassing. Aww, yay Kori's style, I hate skank outfits. -grins at my attire, cargo pants and t-shirt- HUZZA FOR ORIGINAL AND CARGO PANTS! and ice cream, that's good too. I absolutely adore the bee/vic fluff, it's so funny! Good luck on the next chapter! Huzzar for Dick's actions, which saved him from the shiney whip! for now.. ~Happy Writings~ ~Rose |
FallingStars44 chapter 6 . 5/2/2005 Well, I must say, GOOD CHAPTER! I liked how Kori did'nt have to dress like an evil prep for Dick to notice her. AW! And was the figure in a dark room, as in room with no light, or was the figure in a Dark room, the place where they develop pictures? The world may never know...0_o |
StarRob chapter 5 . 4/30/2005 Sweet! Just keep on writing long ones! |
FallingStars44 chapter 5 . 4/29/2005 YES! I love this story, and right about now i want to kill Kitten, but that's beside the point. Yeah, good story, I love the MURDER! well, I don't, like, approve murder, I just like it in the story, aspect, dealy, yeah, done now. |
gladdecease chapter 5 . 4/29/2005 Oh, thanks. It's not a lame title; using other languages for a title is cool, 'specially if most people wouldn't know what it means. Makes the story seem mysterious, you know? And yes, I'm taking Japanese I. _ Official class in school, really easy the way it's taught, and honor level credit! Which is quite good for class rank. Don't worry about not doing well; you'll get better over time, and I'm pretty sure you could find someone else who is interested in learning. If you find enough, you could get an entire class together. Yay me; I figured out who Garth is at the beginning of the chapter. It took me three chapters to figure out Roy...so this is quite good for me. Crush and she-bully chapter; good for Kori and Dick pairing, yet also bad. Why does the she-bully always have to be "hot" or "troll"? Oh, well. Raven blushed, which was amazingly good for Gar, but then bad as she blushed infinite times for Garth. Coincidence that their names are so close? Or are these the actual names of the comic book people? I wouldn't know; sadly, I'm comic illiterate, with the exception of the main Titans. Ja, mata! |
Neko Starfire chapter 5 . 4/29/2005 OH! update very very very very soon please. are they gonna do girl talk? or something, or is Kori gonna buy the outfit that she wears on teen titans? |
writerofmoredoom chapter 3 . 4/29/2005 That was actually really funny. No, not funny, hilarious! They broke into a police station, how did you think of that? Who was murdered, anyway? Still really interesting too. Please keep writing and put disclaimers in your chapters. Do not get sued by Cartoon Network. If you get sued they'll probably take this fic off the sight and i like this fic. So don't get sued! |