A great story. I liked the part where Gil went after Sara.

Great story.

Oh my! I was going to write a Fic with the spoilers for tonight's episode ("Committed"), but as usual, someone beat me to it. I'm really looking forward to tonight's episode more than any other episode! Great possible plot! It may just carry out like this!

- Rebecca

Absolutely mind-blowingly brilliant! The suspence was built up really well in such a short piece and I loved that when Grissom lost control you just went all out.

The descriptions are all spot on and the end is just perfect.

At times I did find it slightly confusing, but overall that ended up adding to the piece.

Thank you for writing this, I'm now even more excited about seeing Committed than before.

Wow!I wish TPTB took a leaf or two out of your book...I absolutely loved the way you described Grissom's panic. I could feel it build inside myself as well (emphatic much? ;D). You really did a good job because Grissom's always so hard to write (for me at least).Keep up the good work.

Oh my god, that is an quite intense story you wrote here.

I love how you managed to create an atmosphere of fear and to see this scene unfold through Grissom's eyes makes the experience even more intense.

I know I repeat myself :-) but as always you showed a great insight into Grissom's character.

Let's see how everythings's work out on Thursday and thank you for sharing this story with us!

Sira

Great story; it would be awesome if that really happened. :) I can't wait until Thursday, either - I'm so excited!

Now only if that would happen. Great idea on how it should go. *sniff* poor Sara